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SEA
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0 posted 2000-02-25 10:33 AM



Rainstorm Rageing
grey clouds that boom
never will I
"feel the gloom"

Soaking wet~
smile on my face
saddness in my heart?
Not a trace!

Can you imagine
not a care to be found?
Splashing in puddles
on the ground

~Down by the Ocean
at home by the Sea~
Playing in the rain
you'll find me!
-SEA-

© Copyright 2000 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 2000-02-25 11:04 AM


SEA, this was lighthearted and playful! Probably the only happy rain poem I've ever read!  Thank you so much!!
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2 posted 2000-02-25 11:40 AM


This is great, SEA!! I think we are well on our way to having a HAPPY Poetry day at Passions!!  

Denise

January Flowers
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3 posted 2000-02-25 11:44 AM


Happy Poetry Day
Happy Poetry Day
Happy Poetry Day

Sure do like the sounds of that...
COUNT ME IN!!!

I loved this, SEA!

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4 posted 2000-02-25 12:15 PM


  
SEA
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5 posted 2000-02-25 06:21 PM


WhtDove,Denise,JF and Suthern~ thanks!  
Janet Marie
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6 posted 2000-02-25 07:30 PM


SEA this is beautiful and sweet...
I'm there with ya..squishing the sand between our toes


 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


Poet deVine
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7 posted 2000-02-25 07:42 PM


Poet deVine hears the cry for 'happy poetry'.. can this be? Can they truly want to make merry with their muses?  (rubbing her hands together and laughing hysterically!)  Poet deVine is prepared to do battle for Happy Poetry Day!!!


Cute poem Sea!!!! Thanks for the inspiration!

Aimster
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8 posted 2000-02-25 07:47 PM


~Sea

This was so cute and fun..downright darling. Happy Poetry Day...hey count me in, where do I sign up LOL...Much love to everyone here at Passions!! TGIF!!

Amy


 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

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