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Walter Poe
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 787


0 posted 2000-02-25 09:55 AM



I am here
Give in
I  am love
Im yours

Be mine
My love
Hold Me
Eternal

All i am
Is for you
All i been
Has been you

Be me
Lover
Be you
Forever

See Me
Im here
With me
My lover

Heart
to
Heart
Moreover

Cross mine
Wife
and
Mother

Eternal
And
Forever
My All

 Pride of place in the human race goes to one without a trace,
of subtlety style ego or grace for this position, I wish to say, i would be proud as i am greater than any other face in the crowd


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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-02-25 10:06 AM


Walter~ this is so very nice! How loving!   -SEA
Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
2 posted 2000-02-25 12:05 PM



~Walter

Simple but elegant poem. This really touched me. She is a special lady...whomever this poem is too, that much I can tell. I hope she only knows how much you feel for her! Congrats on a wonderful poem.

Amy


 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~

January Flowers
Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209
South Carolina
3 posted 2000-02-25 12:09 PM


*Big Fat Sigh*

Yet another happy poem!

Thank you, Walter, for sharing words so sweet!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

4 posted 2000-02-25 03:53 PM


well, I dont know what makes me smile the most here...first of all I am touched beyond expression to your reply of my poem and dedication,...that you "ventured out of the dark" and found my poem is an honor all in itself(smile)...so I thank you,
seeing this love filled poem you have written makes my day!
See you in our home away from home
take care,janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


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