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Compgirl
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0 posted 02-25-2000 08:50 AM       View Profile for Compgirl   Email Compgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Compgirl

I do not mean to give you presure of any kind
to burden your heart with the thoughts of mine.
To question your committments with our savior
to give you grief with my behavior.

I wanted true love before my time was through
to feel that soft touch I see in you.
Experience the love I feel from your words
just that one moment to feel safe and secure.

I longed for the laughs and the warm smile
your hand in mine as we walked the mile.
Hearing the words "I love you" as they were meant to be said
understanding the emotions that run through my head.

Love is a terrifying trial
we all run, we all hide through denial.
I wont hurt you or cause you tears
only make you smile, feel alive, to face your fears.

Trust in me as your friend
I don't give false statements or try to pretend.
When you see me just show me that smile
through your eyes love shows with what your heart has compiled.


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whiskey
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1 posted 02-25-2000 09:00 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

I really liked this, its very powerful and also very good  
SEA
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2 posted 02-25-2000 09:03 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Compgirl~ this is really very sweet and genlte. I liked it a lot.   -SEA
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3 posted 02-25-2000 09:30 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I liked this... well done!  
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4 posted 02-25-2000 04:33 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Nicely said..

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