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Compgirl
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0 posted 2000-02-25 08:50 AM


I do not mean to give you presure of any kind
to burden your heart with the thoughts of mine.
To question your committments with our savior
to give you grief with my behavior.

I wanted true love before my time was through
to feel that soft touch I see in you.
Experience the love I feel from your words
just that one moment to feel safe and secure.

I longed for the laughs and the warm smile
your hand in mine as we walked the mile.
Hearing the words "I love you" as they were meant to be said
understanding the emotions that run through my head.

Love is a terrifying trial
we all run, we all hide through denial.
I wont hurt you or cause you tears
only make you smile, feel alive, to face your fears.

Trust in me as your friend
I don't give false statements or try to pretend.
When you see me just show me that smile
through your eyes love shows with what your heart has compiled.



© Copyright 2000 Patty Lynn - All Rights Reserved
whiskey
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1 posted 2000-02-25 09:00 AM


I really liked this, its very powerful and also very good  
SEA
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2 posted 2000-02-25 09:03 AM


Compgirl~ this is really very sweet and genlte. I liked it a lot.   -SEA
suthern
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3 posted 2000-02-25 09:30 AM


I liked this... well done!  
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 2000-02-25 04:33 PM


Nicely said..

HUGS

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