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CrazyChick
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0 posted 02-25-2000 02:00 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for CrazyChick

          I Miss You

I can feel your tears upon my cheek
as the rain pours down on my face
I can feel your breath on my neck
as the wind whistles through the trees
I can feel your warm, strong arms wrapped around me
in the cold, winter night air

Sometimes I can almost picture you
standing next to me
Sometimes I can hear your voice
telling me you still love me
Sometimes, in my dreams
I see you in a safe place,  and your happy

Even if it's only my imagination
it's still a comfort
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Aimster
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1 posted 02-25-2000 02:08 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~CC~

Nice poem! I really liked this one. It's always very hard to miss someone and not know how they are. I hope that things get better for you. At any rate, you did justice to that emotion by writing this poem.

AMY

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
CrazyChick
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2 posted 02-25-2000 02:18 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

thank you very much Amy  
January Flowers
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3 posted 02-25-2000 04:24 AM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

"even if it's only my imagination
it's still a comfort"

Such a suiting ending...Often times I thank God for the tangibility of my own imagination...Comfort, yes.  

Great poem.
JamesMichael
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4 posted 02-25-2000 05:59 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I liked this poem.  Its nice to know that our imaginations can comfort us.  James
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CrazyChick~
I like this.
Keep the visions.
~*Marge*~


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6 posted 02-25-2000 09:55 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I like this, too... take what comfort your imagination gives! *S*
Janet Marie
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7 posted 02-25-2000 10:00 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

you have a beautiful imagination...
lovely imagery and emotions in this...i relate to this one. take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

tracie66
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8 posted 02-26-2000 02:10 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

such emotion and beautifully written...I to loved the imagery
CrazyChick
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9 posted 02-26-2000 03:19 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Thank you everyone  
paulsm
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Very touching, I can relate to that  

Thankyou
RufffRyder
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After reading this,I have to say that your name just doesn`t fit.
I see a kind,caring Chick with a wonderful imagination.
Nice read Chick
Elizabeth Santos
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12 posted 02-26-2000 05:06 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

You've captured the dream in this poem.
Hang on to it
Liz
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13 posted 02-26-2000 07:00 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Beautiful poem. You can feel the longing...
CrazyChick
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Thank you everyone!!!!!  
Thank you RuffRider for the nice compliment  
JamesMichael
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15 posted 03-14-2000 04:38 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

This really touches me each time I read it..."I can feel your tears upon my cheek...as the rain pours down on my face"...lovely writing...James
CrazyChick
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16 posted 03-15-2000 01:19 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

Thank You James!    
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