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Issey the Rabbit(story for my daughter)
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Issey the Rabbit(story for my daughter) |
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jbowie Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 135BANGOR (that OR) ME |
I know this may no be the right forum, but please help me out, I am trying to write a story for my daughter-add in please or correct whatever Issey the Rabbit always liked a warm spring day she loved blustery march and the coming of may when it was cold she knew winter would pass and soon she would play in warm sun and green grass Clover beds as soft as fluffy goose down the sun dons clouds like a kings golden crown Issey ate her fill from the fresh buds of spring always on the lookout for some unknown new thing During her day she may see a ladybug fly or blackbirds flying above in the sky Issey always explored beyond what was known wanted to go even further when she was all grown But no matter how far in the day she did roam when the time came she always hurried home When she came home her mother always asked "Where did you go on your wandering task?" "I saw birds flying in a twirling play" "and a ladybug crawling in the warmth of the day" "It sounds so lovely" her mother said with care "Now go wash up while your dinner I prepare" After dinner with her stomach full and tight Issey began to get ready to sleep for the night She washed her face and brushed her teeth and jumped in her bed feeling warm underneath As she laid cozy in her warm little bed her Mama and Papa came and kissed her on the head "I love you" said Mama and Papa said it too And Isabelle drifted to sleep knowing it was true A real man kisses his children goodnight |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Nothing to be added or corrected. Well done. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm all smiles... this is wonderful! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
This is beautiful and such a wonderful gift from the heart to your daughter.  Don't change a word ! It's perfect as it is !  |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Well everyone knows that I'm really a child and I LOVE it.. HUGS Ouvrir mon coeur et âme |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JBowie~ This is absolutely BEAUTIFUL~ ' A real man kisses his children goodnight' Indeed they do~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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