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PoeticKnight
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New Orleans, LA


0 posted 02-24-2000 05:42 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

As she asked me please
I fell to my knees
A forgotten man

I have traveled the seas
Of false securities
Reaching out my hand

To break these chains
That have still remained
They always do

But here comes the pain
With the falling rain
Itís nothing new

Now, thereís a new wind blowing
The haze is clearing
A new revelation

Like a fire showing
The flames Iím fearing,
That old temptation

And for a moment all is still
Except for my wavering will
An absence of sound

I dare not leave until,
Of her, I get my fill
And sink softly to the ground

Waiting for the sun to rise
And shed light on my tired eyes
To begin once again

The journey I so despise
Her name whispers around me
As it flies,

Upon the Eastern wind

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Corinne
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state of confusion


1 posted 02-24-2000 05:50 PM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne



Very much to my liking, JML!

Corinne
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Thanks Corinne.
Janet Marie
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3 posted 02-24-2000 06:15 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

you were expecting me right?    LOL
well... now your just showing off(smile)
this is excellent and the very difficult rhyme pattern was not lost on me...
poerty in motion! perfection!
stalk ya later, janet


 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

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