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Red Baron $ Cookie the BEAR

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Ma at
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0 posted 02-24-2000 02:32 PM       View Profile for Ma at   Email Ma at   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ma at

the red baron was flying
with his cape over the fires
of desire in cyber times hues
and way down below he could see
the sire and the crafters of **** me games
riding low to touch the snow
the red baron came closer in have a clear view.
hey is that cookie the bear over their
and the 3 blind lice
yea..its seems so to me
but i though he was putting out our fires
and cleaning up the environment
what happen to him
please tell me.. mr PAN
well the story goes, as i have told before
he was broken hearted
by some women up the street
who just couldnt find his beat..
a muse he was.. a fighter of wrong doers
so he went a cooking
hoping to find a new song
in the streets of beaten drums
and deeper and deeper sunk his feet
into the radio active news of allure,
forgetting his true power
and wanting to kill all sweet beings even more
someone will pay for all his lost songs.
but, he is not dead
he is just possessed by the wrong
MR. virus of desire
and the hackers of the sire
take me closer
introduce  my name
as permission to enter his game
Mr. Red Baron
bows down to Master cookie
may we enter your cast of fires
reveal the word...
who do you love
and who do you serve
we love you  cookie
we serve you master
very well enter, but
sit quitely and listen to the rules
when your name floats up to the top of the scroll
you may ask only one question?
if your question is not worthy, you  must leave
and the doors will be locked shut, closed tight for ever to your  name
you will be banned from this site and anyother sights
that hold my name you will be transplanted and severly
beaten for trespassing against my name
so the minuets went fast
and the RED BARON was up.
and His name was called
MR. red baron state your cause!
Lord Master of demons and darkness
believer of the diseased to please
I come humble crawling deep on my knees
I bring a message to you from way up high
the seven great beings from the logos bear star
requested your presence in galactic connection
the mercury retrograve is causing the LORDS of karma
vista, nada and portia too to realign real time magic
and called for you... i beg in behalf of the cocreative council
to  attent the meeting on the cosmic plane
the LORD of the 4th ray Paul venetian
has a favor to say
the gates open at 7...
on the 2nd day of 7.. please your highnest
attend could you say
small red baron who flies with covered eyes
you make me laught, i just want to cry...
who the hell are these elders before your throne...
i know not these heavens..from logos be born..
but because your jokes cracked open these yokes
I will attend this meeting in heaven..
now be gone you pesty bag of flees
be gone before i take a bite of thee
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Dusk Treader
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1 posted 02-24-2000 03:05 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Definetly an interesting poem but it is just that: a poem, and this is a forum for prose.  So I'll be moving this to Open #6 for you.  My email is at the top of the window, email me if you have any questions.

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley

2 posted 02-24-2000 07:36 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Well, I'm scratching my head on this one... perhaps I need an interpreter?
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