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just_another_fe
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MICHIGAN


0 posted 02-24-2000 02:07 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

I MISS YOU SO MUCH
AND IT'S ONLY DAY THREE.
I CATCH MYSELF THINKING
WHERE COULD YOU BE.
I STILL SLEEP WITH MY PHONE
WAITING FOR YOUR CALL
AND WHEN I DON'T GET IT
AGAIN I FALL.
I WANT YOU TO MISS ME
BUT I DON'T THINK YOU CARE.
DO YOU EVEN REALIZE
THAT I'M NOT THERE!
WHEN I SEE YOU ON LINE
I WANT TO SAY HI
BUT I DON'T THINK YOU'LL ANSWER
AND AGAIN I'LL CRY.


© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 02-24-2000 02:11 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

this is sadly sweet...and I realte to this one all too well...hearfelt expression.may I send you a 'sister poet" hug(smile)
take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

Aimster
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Charlotte, NC


2 posted 02-25-2000 02:54 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~JAF~

Ohhhh I feel the sadness of this poem. Its hard as anything when you miss someone so much. And you don't even know if you come into their thoughts. BUT remember something, you are a wonderful person with lots to give. So try to smile a little, and embrace the good things life has to offer.

AMY  

 ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~
CrazyChick
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3 posted 02-25-2000 02:57 AM       View Profile for CrazyChick   Email CrazyChick   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CrazyChick

I know exactly how you feel       its a horrible feeling      I wish you all the best

you did a great job!  
January Flowers
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4 posted 02-25-2000 04:20 AM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Ditto on the above commments!  Amazing how heartbreaking the "silence" can be.  You expressed this well.
Compgirl
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5 posted 02-25-2000 09:47 AM       View Profile for Compgirl   Email Compgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Compgirl

I hope that loneliness is replaced with many joys. Your poem said many feelings I have often felt. Loved your poem..
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on the threshold of a dream


6 posted 02-25-2000 09:49 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I can relate... when every thought is I miss you and every breath brings another thought. *S*
SEA
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with you


7 posted 02-25-2000 09:50 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

J_A_F_~ I think this is so well said. Very sad. -SEA
just_another_fe
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8 posted 02-25-2000 02:13 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

First I wanna say that you guyz really are the BEST!

Janet: I'sorry that you relate. i wish this on no one.

Aimster: thank you thats so sweet *smile* and i'll try thanx

CC: sorry that you feel it and best of luck to you also  

SEA,JF&CG: thanks

suthern: you are so right "when every thought is I miss you and every breath brings another thought"  thank you  

1 more time U GUYZ ARE THE BEST! I LOVE YOU GUYZ!
 
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