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I Think I am in Love

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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 02-24-2000 12:19 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

Im haunted by her
Whispered words,
Her hair, her face
Shes a shadow from
The darkness,
A lady born of mystery
With a look and
Twist of her slender wrist,
I am mesmerized
Within her soul

Cant you hear her now?
She calls to us all
Upon a barren ledge,
Overlooking the endless sea
I am not the only one
Who has come this way
And I know that,
I am not the last
To look upon
Those colorless eyes,
And into a heart that knows not
The consequences of
Emotional greed
To satisfy the tell-tale
Signs of humanity
In decline

I, in almost all certainty,
Should have recognized
All the warnings
Before I stopped
To listen to her song
Now, finally,
I think I am in love

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January Flowers
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1 posted 02-24-2000 01:13 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

I've read this one over and over...
and can't say that I really get the "story".
But having read it aloud,
had to tell you how beautifully these words
are coupled together.
Simply vocally musical.
I will continue to disect this one
and get back to you.
Intriguing, to say the least.
PoeticKnight
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2 posted 02-24-2000 01:16 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Thanks January. I'd love your dissection.
Janet Marie
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3 posted 02-24-2000 01:59 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

JML...
"I"M BAAAAAACCCKKKK!!!!
(do you feel like your being stalked) ...
Seriously though...
I think Im in LOVE with this poem...
its SO beautiful...sensual and mystic...

"Shes a shadow from
The darkness,
A lady born of mystery
With a look and
Twist of her slender wrist,
I am mesmerized
Within her soul"...

oh yes...Im in love...(smile)
stalk ya later janet marie


 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

PoeticKnight
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4 posted 02-24-2000 02:21 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

Stalk me yes! I have arrived! LOL

Thanks janet.
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5 posted 02-24-2000 11:58 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

JML~ yet another to amaze me and touch my heart.(I think I gotta bruise now! LOL)-SEA
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6 posted 02-25-2000 07:27 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JML~
Whimsically lovely.
My desire would be that we've all heard her song at one time or another.
You just sang it beautifully.
~*Marge*~


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