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Hold me
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Hold me |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Hold me tight, Don't want this night to end, I want this night to remember, Hold me,kiss me,touch me,love me, Hold me close to you, Love is so sweet, Don't want this night to end, Let's remember to the years, we spent together, Let's hold hands, And hold on to the life we make together, Let's take a deep breathe for awhile, for the next step we take , so hold ,e Tell me, Tell me the thingd we used to say, The night is young, And we can mke very wish upon very star, Hold me tight, Don't let me go, Hold me tight, |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful love poem, Vandana!  Denise |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
This would make a beautiful song! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ Lovely, dear. So full of longing and love. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
This was very beautiful Vandana....Hold me, kiss me, touch me, love me this was sweet  |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Reminds me of a Beatles tune!  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Some very desirable and sweet moments. James |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice Vandana... I liked your poem very much. |
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