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Hold me

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vandana
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0 posted 02-24-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


Hold me tight,
Don't want this night to end,
I want this night to remember,
Hold me,kiss me,touch me,love me,
Hold me close to you,
Love is so sweet,
Don't want this night to end,
Let's remember to the years,
we spent together,
Let's hold hands,
And hold on to the life we make together,
Let's take a deep breathe for awhile,
for the next step we take ,
so hold ,e
Tell me,
Tell me the thingd we used to say,
The night is young,
And we can mke very wish
upon very star,
Hold me tight,
Don't let me go,
Hold me tight,


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Denise
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1 posted 02-24-2000 10:50 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful love poem, Vandana!  

Denise
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2 posted 02-25-2000 10:08 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

This would make a beautiful song!
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 02-26-2000 12:33 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

VanDana~
Lovely, dear.
So full of longing and love.
~*Marge*~



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tracie66
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4 posted 02-26-2000 02:16 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

This was very beautiful Vandana....Hold me, kiss me, touch me, love me this was sweet  
Poet deVine
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5 posted 02-26-2000 06:48 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Reminds me of a Beatles tune!  
JamesMichael
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Some very desirable and sweet moments.  James
Mike
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Very nice Vandana...  I liked your poem very much.
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