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Hold me

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vandana
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0 posted 02-24-2000 11:04 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana


Hold me tight,
Don't want this night to end,
I want this night to remember,
Hold me,kiss me,touch me,love me,
Hold me close to you,
Love is so sweet,
Don't want this night to end,
Let's remember to the years,
we spent together,
Let's hold hands,
And hold on to the life we make together,
Let's take a deep breathe for awhile,
for the next step we take ,
so hold ,e
Tell me,
Tell me the thingd we used to say,
The night is young,
And we can mke very wish
upon very star,
Hold me tight,
Don't let me go,
Hold me tight,


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Janet Marie
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since 01-22-2000
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1 posted 02-24-2000 02:14 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

very emotion filled expression...we all want to hold on to these precious moments in time.
nice work. take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

Elizabeth Santos
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since 11-08-1999
Posts 9405
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2 posted 02-24-2000 02:40 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Very loving title and poem. Glad to see he's finally with you (hehe), so many poems from your pen of him leaving.
Hold him and hang on
Liz
JamesMichael
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3 posted 02-26-2000 04:15 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

There have been days when more than any thing I just wanted to be held by someone that truly cared for me and was feeling the same exact need to be held by me.  James
tracie66
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4 posted 02-28-2000 04:09 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Hold me close don't let go
Our love is forever this we know

So hold me always, forever more
and for always our love will endure

Lovely poem Vandana

 Keep all the windows of your mind open
Anne Rooks
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5 posted 02-28-2000 04:52 AM       View Profile for paulsm   Email paulsm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for paulsm

Vandana,

This brought a tear to my eye, I know this feeling, you tell it well.

Thankyou !!!

Paulsm
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very heartfelt words  
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