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Songbird
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Some Daffodils ventured out in January
Amid the brown leaves of winter
February, they were spread like
Butter on hard cold toast

Today a bird awoke me
Then, when I ventured
Out the door
The Forsythia had
Burst in bloom
Shining forth
Like
Sunshine
On
A
Silver
Plate


[This message has been edited by Septsong (edited 02-24-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Marcia Estep - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 02-24-2000 09:16 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Wow! What beautiful imagery! This is a very nice piece of work. I really liked the last line! Keep writing, and I'll keep reading.

~Amy~
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Martie
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Sigh...how lovely.
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Wow, Septsong, what a beautiful poem.  You paint such a vivid picture with your imagery and unique style. It's hard to find the words to describe how captiviating this piece of art is. This is by far your best poem. Applause!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee  
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Don't know where you live , but we sure could use some of that here .Thanks for the up-lift
Doc
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5 posted 02-24-2000 11:48 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Oh how beautiful!!  

Denise
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SeptSong~
I LIKE VERY MUCH !
Just love the presentation.
Great graphic beginning !  
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Thumbs up. Like the picture you pained... )
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Serve up some more... this is delightful!  
 
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