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Lost Dreamer
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0 posted 02-24-2000 06:38 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Inner Peace

You see me cautiously reserving
my flowing tender love
like a little child playing
hide and seek around your heart.

While thousands of raging storms
of great and mighty magnitude
slowly hover through your aching mind.
I see them flooding your brilliant intellect
and once treasured captivating reason
beyond your inner reaching vision.

Can I tenderly take your hand in mine
and lovingly guide you to the serene safety
of the inspirational land of my peaceful dreams?
Where happily once we in unity with each other
could dance on the fullest moon and know our completeness
in the existing universal atmosphere of beautiful inner peace.



[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 02-24-2000).]
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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 02-24-2000 07:00 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

LostDreamer~
The greatest peace
we can bestow,
is found within
the inner glow.

GREAT THOUGHTS here, gal.
~*Marge*~


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~could dance on the fullest moon and know our completeness in the existing universal atmosphere of beautiful inner peace~ this poem is devine...tracie
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Well, that's what you gave me while reading this...inner peace!  Very beautiful!!
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4 posted 02-24-2000 12:36 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Well done, LD!
Lost Dreamer
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Marge: Thank You, I love that inner glow

tracie66: Thank You, I liked that line too.

WhtDove: Thank You, it's always refreshing to know someone can be moved by a poem.

Suthern: Thank You
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Beautiful, Dreamer. " playing hide and seek around your heart"....wonderful phrase  
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This is so beautiful, Gloria! This has a peaceful gentle quality. I love it!

Denise
Michael
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Could use a dos of that inner peace right now - that's for sure.  Beautiful poem, Gloria.  To fins that feeling alone is a milestone, to find that feeling with someone else would be a miracle.


Michael
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Gloria...where are you coming up with all this inspiration girl, you got yourself one heck of a muse these days   Wonderful work my friend  
Elizabeth Santos
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Very creativeand beautiful thought,to take   someone to an inward place
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