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Lost Dreamer
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Somewhere near the Rainbow

0 posted 2000-02-24 06:38 AM


Inner Peace

You see me cautiously reserving
my flowing tender love
like a little child playing
hide and seek around your heart.

While thousands of raging storms
of great and mighty magnitude
slowly hover through your aching mind.
I see them flooding your brilliant intellect
and once treasured captivating reason
beyond your inner reaching vision.

Can I tenderly take your hand in mine
and lovingly guide you to the serene safety
of the inspirational land of my peaceful dreams?
Where happily once we in unity with each other
could dance on the fullest moon and know our completeness
in the existing universal atmosphere of beautiful inner peace.



[This message has been edited by Lost Dreamer (edited 02-24-2000).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-02-24 07:00 AM


LostDreamer~
The greatest peace
we can bestow,
is found within
the inner glow.

GREAT THOUGHTS here, gal.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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tracie66
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2 posted 2000-02-24 07:15 AM


~could dance on the fullest moon and know our completeness in the existing universal atmosphere of beautiful inner peace~ this poem is devine...tracie
WhtDove
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3 posted 2000-02-24 12:25 PM


Well, that's what you gave me while reading this...inner peace!  Very beautiful!!
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4 posted 2000-02-24 12:36 PM


Well done, LD!
Lost Dreamer
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5 posted 2000-02-24 09:45 PM


Marge: Thank You, I love that inner glow

tracie66: Thank You, I liked that line too.

WhtDove: Thank You, it's always refreshing to know someone can be moved by a poem.

Suthern: Thank You

Balladeer
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6 posted 2000-02-24 10:22 PM


Beautiful, Dreamer. " playing hide and seek around your heart"....wonderful phrase  
Denise
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7 posted 2000-02-24 11:51 PM


This is so beautiful, Gloria! This has a peaceful gentle quality. I love it!

Denise

Michael
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8 posted 2000-02-25 05:17 AM


Could use a dos of that inner peace right now - that's for sure.  Beautiful poem, Gloria.  To fins that feeling alone is a milestone, to find that feeling with someone else would be a miracle.


Michael

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9 posted 2000-02-25 06:45 AM


Gloria...where are you coming up with all this inspiration girl, you got yourself one heck of a muse these days   Wonderful work my friend  
Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 2000-02-25 09:16 AM


Very creativeand beautiful thought,to take   someone to an inward place
liz

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