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Holding On To Letting Go
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Holding On To Letting Go |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Holding On To Letting Go ~Marge Tindal~ I'm holding on to l e t t i n g go waiting for the f a l l Hoping someone new will be here to catch me when I do S p r e a d your arms open wide Catch me when I f a l l ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Marge, You are brilliant, I love this. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Bravo, Bravo.....We will all catch you when you fall Marge  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. The format isn't exactly as I planned it, but I've been trying to force-feed this poem as a post for DAYS ! The preview button just didn't like it. So, I had to send it blind. Poop ! Tracie~ It isn't really me doing the falling .. but there are some lovely people here who need the arms of friends to catch them. Thanks, glad you liked. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
Nice poem, nice style, enjoyed it very much. |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
 Marge, Once again I am amazed by your talent. I really liked the format of this poem, as well as the message. Great job!! Amy [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 02-24-2000).] |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I think if I were to fall you would be there to try to catch me. Cause that's the way you are. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem.Keep it up.I really enjoy your work. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Just let go, Marge, to all those wonderful words that keep flowing from your heart. Keep them coming, you light up the forum Liz |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is wonderful, Marge! Your creativity is never ending!! Denise |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Profound. I don't know what it is Marge/mom, but you always appear with words of wisdom for me... someday I should explain, but today I just thank you and applaud. LOUDLY. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Don't worry Marge, I'll be here to catch you any time!!! That's what friends are for right???? Cute poem!!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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CrazyChick Member
since 2000-01-05
Posts 132 |
Great Work!! I love the format |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well, the title alone sucked me in...LOL You're holding on to letting go and I'm letting go of holding on...Hope someone catches you, me I think I'll just float for awhile... Michael |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ Thank you. Was just trying to spread a little hope and love for those who might need it. Tracie~ Thank you. SeptSong~ Glad you enjoyed. Amy~ Why, I thank you very much. Martie~ Rest assured, I would ! VanDana~ Thank you, honey. Elizabeth, my friend~ What a wonderful friend you are. Denise~ The sincerest thanks always to you. Serenity~ Write me anytime you feel the need to explain. I welcome your reads. I can always feel your ~spirit~. Devina~ I KNOW you would ! CrazyChick~ Thanks so much. Michael~ You were one of the ones I was thinking of when I wrote it.  Floating is a good thing ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ a few days ago, I was trying to let go of holding on. Glad I held on! This is wonderful!-SEA |
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Compgirl Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 85USA |
You have a style and a way with words that I wish were my own..  ) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
very clever |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Very creative artwork! It matches the feelings perfectly. If it was any better, none of could imagine how. It must be frustrating, having to send it blind, though. This is unique! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ If you had 'let go' we'd have been here to catch you. Glad you didn't have to though. CompGirl~ Wow ! What a nice compliment. Thank you. Hoot~ Thank you. Rosemary~ My friend, if it's good enough to pass your inspection ... it's gotta be pretty gosh-darned okay ! HUG HUG HUG HUG HUG HUG .... Thank you ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
AAAaaahhhhhh! There's "Marge-Art" again! This is witty, to say the least. Isn't it amazing how differently the words read when they are "active" in type? This is a grand display of your talent! |
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Annie78 Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 469here then there then back here |
thank you marge.....and know that yes it does help. think there might be some more out there that might need this at this time of year. Merry Christmas and Happy New Year and know that I love it when you are honest with me. sometimes what we want to hear should not be said, but what we need to hear whether we like it or not is just right. Thanks again. Annie there is but a short time to exist, love,laugh,live and never stop believing in miracles |
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