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Moses Don't Do the Wave (no blasphemy here i dont think)

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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 02-24-2000 02:25 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for wayoutwalt


I will live and I will die
In the blink of an eye
Corrective lenses might help
But then again I'd just yelp
For they pinch my nose I need air

So for the sum of it all
I live and die for I'm small
Without my lenses for aid
I might just blink and betrayed
Adjusting to darkness down there

So if I'll live and not die
By just not blinking my eye
Moses arms high on the mount
As his foes die I lose count
Said he "It's impolite if you stare!"


if this makes sense then well um you are precious!


 Oh yuh!

p.s. see comment by mwah below



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1 posted 02-24-2000 02:47 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Okay, so call me semi-precious!  Moses? Doin' the wave?  Beautiful, funny, and unique.  Thanx again,walt-wit-man.
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2 posted 02-24-2000 03:47 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

A diamond in the rough !  
That's me !
While you are the gem of wit.
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 02-24-2000 03:54 AM       View Profile for Mistikman   Email Mistikman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mistikman

lol, your grasp of the ludicrously absurd leaves me dumbfounded walt   well done on another incoherent and hilarious poem  

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4 posted 02-24-2000 08:09 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Actually, I think Moses might have just got a kick out of this, like I did! Thanks Walt!

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5 posted 03-12-2000 01:43 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

k i now this was buried but my wife took my puter bout after i posted this so i couldn't splain:

there's a part in the Bible bout Moses keepin his arms up so the opposing army would lose..yuh so if he would keep his arms up his side would prevail...so if i don't blink i don't die he keeps his arms up his army wins yuhyuhyuhuyuuhyuy okokok...i know its bad if yuh gotta splain it but i needed too and apolgies to those that read it and got it...
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6 posted 12-20-2000 03:31 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Bumping this little gem for Walty !
Love ya' buddy.
~*Marge*~


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