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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2000-02-24 02:25 AM



I will live and I will die
In the blink of an eye
Corrective lenses might help
But then again I'd just yelp
For they pinch my nose I need air

So for the sum of it all
I live and die for I'm small
Without my lenses for aid
I might just blink and betrayed
Adjusting to darkness down there

So if I'll live and not die
By just not blinking my eye
Moses arms high on the mount
As his foes die I lose count
Said he "It's impolite if you stare!"


if this makes sense then well um you are precious!
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 Oh yuh!

p.s. see comment by mwah below



[This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 03-12-2000).]

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2000-02-24 02:47 AM


Okay, so call me semi-precious!  Moses? Doin' the wave?  Beautiful, funny, and unique.  Thanx again,walt-wit-man.
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2 posted 2000-02-24 03:47 AM


A diamond in the rough !  
That's me !
While you are the gem of wit.
~*Marge*~


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Mistikman
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3 posted 2000-02-24 03:54 AM


lol, your grasp of the ludicrously absurd leaves me dumbfounded walt   well done on another incoherent and hilarious poem  

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WhtDove
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4 posted 2000-02-24 08:09 AM


Actually, I think Moses might have just got a kick out of this, like I did! Thanks Walt!

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One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
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5 posted 2000-03-12 01:43 AM


k i now this was buried but my wife took my puter bout after i posted this so i couldn't splain:

there's a part in the Bible bout Moses keepin his arms up so the opposing army would lose..yuh so if he would keep his arms up his side would prevail...so if i don't blink i don't die he keeps his arms up his army wins yuhyuhyuhuyuuhyuy okokok...i know its bad if yuh gotta splain it but i needed too and apolgies to those that read it and got it...

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6 posted 2000-12-20 03:31 PM


Bumping this little gem for Walty !
Love ya' buddy.
~*Marge*~


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