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Yesterday's Angel
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Yesterday's Angel |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California 
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YESTERDAY'S ANGEL The last box packed, set by the door. With a sigh, key thrown to the floor. I'll take one last look then I'm gone. That never again here I'm drawn. "Close your eyes and see me fly To you in dream, sweet lullaby." Why do these words still sing to me, Of Yesterday's sweet memory. "Hand picked by God & sent to you I am the one - you know it's true..." Such soft words echoed in heart, Dare I believe, even in part? "Look no further, weary man Stop and rest - it's in His plan" Upon the wall in deepest blue, Yesterday's Angel holds me true. "You have journeyed many years Cried your share of guilt and tears..." Would seem I've many more to go, Nothing's left here for me, I know. "I see all that's in you soul I am here to mend you whole" I'll hold your promise as a token, Though some hearts are meant to be broken. "Look no further, cry no more I am who you're looking for..." I hear your words but cannot see You standing anywhere near me. "See me come to you in white Walk with me all through the night" ‘Tis true by night we dance in dream, But by day die in voiceless scream. "I stir your passion deep inside Give in to me - you need not hide." Alas, there nothing left within, Somehow all died, in giving in. "Open up and feel no shame Our love is pure, a burning flame" Whereby a touch forsakes the name, Till all that's left is tears and blame. "Look no further, see me now To you mi-Lord, I humbly bow..." I am not worthy, see me not, Tomorrow's dream holds me forgot. "I am your lady - ecstacy I hold you close - confide in me" Release from me thy lure of lust, By what bonds dare you hold my trust? "Your soul is mingled now with mine Inseparable through all space and time" A wounded soul that never flies Nor dreams by silenced lullabies. "Look no further - God sent me To set your captive spirit free..." Of all the words you've given me, The truest of all these must be. Good-bye dearest angel of blue. I will look no further for you. An oak frame left upon the wall, I turn from face, from words, from all. On my way out, locking the door Of memories I'll hold no more. If Yesterday's angelic host Or Tomorrow's forgotten ghost. Michael Anderson 'Tis true, Love lasts forever, Only her memory slips away. [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 02-24-2000).] |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
(Applauding loudly!) Wow Michael, this is absolutely breathtaking and beautifully written. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Serenity is blushing once again...I feel like a voyeur after reading this. so intimate and painful...you transform your own pain into beauty for others...Incredible Michael. |
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Mistikman Senior Member
since 2000-01-10
Posts 682San Jose, CA, USA |
I hung on every word Michael, this is exceptional. I'll hold your promise as a token, Though some hearts are meant to be broken. Alas, I seem to have one of those defective hearts too  Feel better Michael, if not for yourself, for everyone here in the forums. |
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Gadget28 Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 33Miami, Florida United States |
This poem was absolutely breath taking! I loved it! I congratulate you! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Michael~ Beautifully done. The release is coming and cannot be easy, my friend. One memory at a time. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Michael your work as of late is just outstanding! Say goodbye to old, hello to new. All need a fresh start, this one's for you! Hearts are not meant to be broken. Remember He came that we might have life, and have it more abundantly!  Outstanding work Michael, outstanding! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
maybe i shouldnt reply to these all i can say is sniff and very good poem yuh leaves muh heart heavy |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Michael WOW! I felt this poem with my very core. Absolutely breathtaking! I have read a few pieces of your work, but this so far is my favorite! I wish you nothing but much love and happiness, as you continue through your journey of life... *Cheers* to moving onward and upward! Great poem! ~Amy~ ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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Songbird Member Elite
since 1999-12-15
Posts 2184Missouri |
I agree with everyone comments here so far on this one. Everyline is this leads on to the next, holding my short attention span. Out of much pain, comes much beauty. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Michael~ this is wonderful. I look forward to reading your poetry,because I know it will touch my heart! -SEA |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Michael, what can I say, that I haven't said before... this poem is absolute brillance...and its emotions effect me deeply as do so many of yours...you have a beautiful soul and an amazing gift...thank you for sharing it with us. take care, janet marie ...there are places inside all our souls... that have never been touched... there are places inside our hearts... that need to be loved this much... Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
One word... BREATHTAKING |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I know where this one's coming from Michael...with the angel and all... This is hard I know..*sending many hugs you're way*- closing that door is always hard!! May peace find you m'friend!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I love this poem Michael. Excellent writing. James |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
An echoing dialogue, very sad and very beautiful Liz |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
ditto to all above.. |
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jeremyc Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 18 |
i quit...i'll never be able to write poetry like that...it's just amazing...good job..some day i hope i'm as good as you  ) |
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Kid Pedestal Junior Member
since 2000-01-04
Posts 26Chandler, Arizona |
Emotional to the heart, to say the least. Each word struck a chord in my mind that will last for some time. Thank you for writing that. Kid Pedestal |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Michael, this was sooo beautiful hon. All life's memories with time become easier to bear, and will always remain special. This was a magical description of saying goodbye to an old home and old memories. Good luck with the move!! May the world hug you today, With it's warmth and love. I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart, That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world, Wishing you well and wishing you love...... ~Isis~ (Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
When you close that door Michael. . . make sure that you open another one. . . Or you will never see what lies outside. . . --------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
There is no other word......WOW! Denise |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
serenity, now I'm blushing...you meant to do that, huh? Mistikman, I'm feeling pretty good considering everything that's happened recently...still have lots to look forward to this life...I won't waste my time sulking. Marge, every day gets a little easier from here. Rebecca, yep, a fresh start in many ways for me. Love the new surroundings, and always helps to be around friends you can trust. Amy, glad this poem moved you so much. I haven't had a chance to read anything of yours yet - I will look just as soon as I post this reply. Welcome to Passions, btw. Janet Marie, I'm so glad my poetry reaches you the way it does. It's nice to know some people out there really understand what's behind your writing. I love your signature, btw. devina, I know you do...a special thnx for you and ((hugs)) right back. jeremyc, ah heck - you already are! Isis, ain't it amazing how Time seems to slow down when you're suffering but speeds along when things are going great? I just hate that. Sven, I don't see much out there for me that's really gonna make a difference. Too many doors and I'm fresh out of keys. Thanks, everyone, for the kind replies. Michael |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
just came back to add this very special poem to my private library... it is a keepsake poem for sure. jm There are places inside our souls - that have never been touched. There are places inside our hearts - that need to be loved this much. ~jm~ |
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