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Lost In A Day Dream

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Eloise
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0 posted 02-24-2000 01:48 AM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Eloise

Lost in a day dream of my very own.
And enjoying the solitude of this moment alone.
A kaleidoscope of thoughts spinning in my head.
As I envision the paths that lie ahead.

On silent wings my heart did soar,
As I revisited places I'd been before.
These thoughts that float inside of me,
Take me to times that used to be.

How grateful I am for the time we shared.
For there was a time that we both cared.
I learned a lot along the way.
It helped me to be what I am today.

I have no regrets of the past.
Though things between us didn't last.
I guess those dreams weren't ours to keep,
But memories of you are embedded deep.

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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 02-24-2000 01:51 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

veryveryvery good loved it i did and yuh im lost in a day dream...love the spoonful i do
Michael
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2 posted 02-24-2000 02:12 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Kind of sad to realize the dreams aren't your to keep.  I know, but the memories are cherished and always will be.  Beautiful words.


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3 posted 02-24-2000 04:17 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Eloise~
I'm reminded of
'A Dream Is A Wish Your Heart Makes'.
All wishes don't come true ...
but the memories you gather are worth keeping.
~*Marge*~


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tracie66
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4 posted 02-24-2000 07:49 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

this is beautiful...I could keep reading over and over..thanks for sharing  
Eloise
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5 posted 02-24-2000 03:45 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

Thank you Walt.  At times we are all lost in a day dream.  Keep dreaming.  

Michael, thank you and just remember, no one can take those memories away.  They are yours to go back and revisit whenever you want.

Marge, I agree and it never hurts to wish and dream.

tracie66, I'm glad that you enjoyed this.  
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6 posted 02-24-2000 11:24 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is beautiful, Eloise!  

Denise
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7 posted 02-25-2000 02:48 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

~Eloise

Beautiful poem and beautiful message. Its a shame that dreams just like everything else must someday come to and end. But on a brighter note...we are not limited in our number of dreams we have or make...the sky is the limit. Great poem!

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