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The Jackal
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the obscene revulsion
the same twisted thing again
if it was free..it still couldnt end
confined in me
my new found superficial enemy
starts pumping those juices again
look at whats pretty..
lets examine what we call fair
treat you with whats left of me
but still find the change of heart
leads to an absolute nowhere.....
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Interesting imagery and a powerful use of words, although I'm not sure what is 'nowhere'...
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