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thebob
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since 02-16-2000
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0 posted 02-23-2000 10:55 PM       View Profile for thebob   Email thebob   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thebob

I could take your hand
and give you my soul
with thee I'll be
forever growing old

I could touch your lips
and kiss your neck
with your hand in mine
forever I will hold

I could die for you
and grant your wishes true
with love and faith
forever this betold

I could share my life
and live to love
with you, my love
forever now unfolds

        forever's secrets were given to me
        she is my forever. and with her i will
        forever stay.

                   thebob
© Copyright 2000 thebob - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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since 07-22-99
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Illinois


1 posted 02-23-2000 11:20 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Sounds like love to me!  

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins
just_another_fe
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since 02-05-2000
Posts 504
MICHIGAN


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I AGREE WITH WD. I BEEN ASKING MYSELF IS THERE SUCH A THING AS FOREVER? IN YOUR CASE I HOPE SO. NICE POEM ITS BEAUTIFUL
Janet Marie
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since 01-22-2000
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3 posted 02-23-2000 11:45 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

tbob...
this poem is absolutly perfect...
I LOVE this beautiful LOVE poem...
this is such a heartfelt expression...
take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

jbowie
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since 02-18-2000
Posts 137
BANGOR (that OR) ME


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nice. That says it all. I have had the same love for ten years, and it has just grown as time passes. hopefully this was written for someone who can appreciate it.
 
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