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thebob
Junior Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 15


0 posted 2000-02-23 10:55 PM


I could take your hand
and give you my soul
with thee I'll be
forever growing old

I could touch your lips
and kiss your neck
with your hand in mine
forever I will hold

I could die for you
and grant your wishes true
with love and faith
forever this betold

I could share my life
and live to love
with you, my love
forever now unfolds

        forever's secrets were given to me
        she is my forever. and with her i will
        forever stay.

                   thebob

© Copyright 2000 thebob - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
1 posted 2000-02-23 11:20 PM


Sounds like love to me!  

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins

just_another_fe
Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 483
MICHIGAN
2 posted 2000-02-23 11:30 PM


I AGREE WITH WD. I BEEN ASKING MYSELF IS THERE SUCH A THING AS FOREVER? IN YOUR CASE I HOPE SO. NICE POEM ITS BEAUTIFUL
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

3 posted 2000-02-23 11:45 PM


tbob...
this poem is absolutly perfect...
I LOVE this beautiful LOVE poem...
this is such a heartfelt expression...
take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


jbowie
Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 135
BANGOR (that OR) ME
4 posted 2000-02-23 11:54 PM


nice. That says it all. I have had the same love for ten years, and it has just grown as time passes. hopefully this was written for someone who can appreciate it.
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