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Spring.....ahh

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WhtDove
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0 posted 02-23-2000 10:43 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

The snow is melting
Soon the buds will grow
And the signs of life
Will soon start to show

The air gets warmer
Gone the days of cold
The sun once again
I've it's warmth to hold

Soon grass is greener
It will need a mow
Goodbye once again
To the cold of snow

Excitment of spring
Is now in the air
You can breathe it in
Feel it everywhere

The birds are chirping
Singing their spring song
Just round the corner
It won't be to long



 <*\\\><    

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins




[This message has been edited by WhtDove (edited 02-24-2000).]
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Lost Dreamer
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1 posted 02-23-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Thank you Rebecca, this was just what I needed to get through the last few weeks of winters grasp. The beautiful spring images you portray make my heart sing with gladness.
jbowie
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2 posted 02-23-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for jbowie   Email jbowie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jbowie

now this is the reason I come here. To be lifted up and out of this crappy winter, same reason I wrote summer storm. Thank you for a nice little view of spring
Janet Marie
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3 posted 02-23-2000 11:47 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

this is so perfect for our winter blues...
very nice dove...and nice to see you here with us as well...
janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

WhtDove
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4 posted 02-24-2000 12:09 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you all! I'm ready for spring, as we had a nice day today, a glimpse of it, in the 60's.  Glad you could all get a whiff.

Janet, I reply in here but don't write in here too often anymore.  Thank you! Most of it is spiritual as you know.  


 <*\\\><    

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins


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Poet deVine
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5 posted 02-24-2000 12:15 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Ok..first I'll tell you that I like your poem...it's refreshing. But I won't make silly remarks like "what's snow"? Or "but my grass is always green"....

I'm hoping that your winter is over soon so you won't have to be cooped up in the house or shovel the driveway or shiver when you take the kids to school.... 'cause I'm your friend (and that's why I'm not saying any of that other stuff either!)  
Michael
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6 posted 02-24-2000 01:38 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Well, I'll tell ya what.  That darn hurricaine followed me home from Houston.  Nothing but high winds and rain here in CA.  So i'll tell you what - if you see Spring in your future...more power to ya.  I'm gonna play in the rain a little bit.  

Beautiful poem, Rebecca.  Maybe the sun will shine for me yet.


Micahel
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7 posted 02-24-2000 03:26 AM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I've got apple-mint, and pine-apple sage, Hibiscus in leaf--loving every minute of it.
A lovely reminder, whitedove, thank you.
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8 posted 02-24-2000 04:27 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

WhiteDove~
Beautiful.

Spring, the eternal hope of all that is
to be.  The promise of new beginnings.
I anxiously await it's coming.

Look, there are robins on the lawn !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 02-24-2000 05:50 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Angel, this is really lovely, shame I'm heading into Autumn/Fall,although I do like it, I do love the spring. Well Done Angel!!  

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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10 posted 02-24-2000 06:30 AM       View Profile for jeremyc   Email jeremyc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jeremyc

YAY!! it's almost spring!!!  a very nice poem...just what i needed!
Marilyn
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11 posted 02-24-2000 07:43 AM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

WE have had a warm spell here as well. Half the snow is gone and it is very warm here (for winter). I too am looking forward to spring.  
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12 posted 02-24-2000 07:56 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

im wearing a dallas cowboy sweatshirt cuz it freakin cold here in ft worth but thats my wifes doing yuh long live spring..liked yur poem i did
WhtDove
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LOL Sharon! What would I do without you around to remind me of that all the time?  Oh, but thanks for not saying it.  haha...guess what?  WE have RAIN!!  Lots of it, thunderstorms. I'll send some to you!

Michael, as the long as the wind is to your back.     I'm gonna be playing in the rain here too for a couple of days. But hey, it brings good things, right?  It can't stay that way forever. So one of these days the sun will shine!  

Serenity that smells good I bet. Enjoy it. Thank you!

Marge yes. Exactly right, and this rain we're now getting will bring just that. Life again!  I don't see Robins yet, but soon I'm sure  

Thank you DA. That summer of yours sure did seem short didn't it?  It did to me.     Yes, spring...ahh, it can be nice days without all the humidity. That's a killer around here!

Jeremyc...I'm with you. YEAH!!!  Glad you enjoyed it!  

Marilyn, we started late here. But only in spots now there is some snow. Most of it is gone, you can actually see the ground. But it's rained so hard, we have flooding in areas right now. Not bad though...I can't wait for spring.

Thanks to all of you!


 <*\\\><    

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins


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WhtDove
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Walt I'm sorry you snuck in there on me. It will pass...the cold that is.   Won't be long and we'll all be complaining it's so darn hot out..hahaha
hoot_owl_rn
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Oh....now you got me longing for spring to get here in a real hurry...Spring is my second favorite season...second only to fall in my book  
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COME ON SPRING This is refreshing, Rebecca!  Well written, too!  

Denise
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Ahhhh, spring... that 48-72 hour period between the cold rain and the sweltering summers. *G* My daffodils are already gone and my yard needs cut AGAIN already! *G*

Great poem, Dovie!!! C'mon down and warm up! *G*
Elizabeth Santos
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Thank you for the breath of fresh air
So sweet and lovely
Liz
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It was spring here a couple of weeks ago and now winter's back--enjoyed your poem!
WhtDove
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20 posted 02-24-2000 08:45 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thanks to all of you! I'm glad you could all get the excitment for spring.

Suthern, I wish I could come! I miss the south. I miss Georgia!  
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21 posted 02-24-2000 10:54 PM       View Profile for lucky   Email lucky   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lucky

I sometimes wonder just how many care... about a song in the breeze or some emotional air, who could get excited over seasons, where it reminds us we'er older than, yet here I'm astonished of those that kare or who may be beleavin what's in the air...(WHAT CAN I SAY..!) Of course it's good..!

I love the way you take the spatula and plaster yer words on papers. Duck or strapping tape works well if your in a hurry... But I love your spatula..!
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22 posted 02-24-2000 11:01 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

Great thoughts, dovey. Spring is more than just a season. It is a feeling of the heart, the time of new life and new beginnings....a time of fresh hope. I love your poem  
WhtDove
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23 posted 02-25-2000 12:14 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Thank you!

Balladeer thank you! You are so right, it is a fresh beginning of new life. Of hope of excitment, and so much more!    
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