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Heart's Desire
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Heart's Desire |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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Heart's Desire Flowing silken tablecloth replacing tattered torn lace that once resembled the intricacy's of a sheltered heart. Maturing intellect allows hearts release from protective custody as playfully you create a field of desires that dance in delight. Knowing uninhibited freedom releases butterflies of fright you listen carefully as the forest of temptation speaks softly within. The reins of your lonely soul cry for a moment of pure bliss as logic steals fantasy's before their allowed to elate into reason. Always returning to a cautiously constructed barrier banning heart's desire. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Wow - I really like this LD! Well written - which such a mass of imagery.  'Writing sharpens life; life enriches writing' Sylvia Plath |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
"The reins of your lonely soul cry for a moment of pure bliss as logic steals fantasy's before their allowed to elate into reason." LD...this is excellence of expression! janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was absolutely terrific! WOW!!! <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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jbowie Member
since 2000-02-18
Posts 135BANGOR (that OR) ME |
very interesting and depressing. I really liked how you formed your thought though. Good piece, and I hope to see more original pieces such as this |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Gloria...I think this is perhaps my favorite of all the pieces you have written. I love the imagery you use in it to create a detailed picture for your reader. Beautiful, yet sad, this is in it's nature. Wonderful job |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Gloria, you've been busy !  WOW girl !  |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Severn: Thank You very much Janet Marie: Thank You kindly WhtDove: Thank You for your kind reply jbowie: Thank you, glad you enjoyed Ruth: I thank you from the depths of my heart Munda: To say the least, thank you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I agree! This is wonderful, Gloria! Beautiful imagery! Denise |
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