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~slow dance~
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~slow dance~ |
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jeremyc Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 18 |
there's a slow song playing and we begin to dance a feeling comes over me, a feeling of romance your body's against mine and we sway side to side there's no need for words, but nothing to hide you press your forehead up against mine i look in your eyes, look for a sign i become dimly aware of my hands on your hips but at the moment, all i see is your lips suddenly the music fades out in the distance if there are others around, i know not their existance i lean in, and finally my lips meet yours my mind is cleared, but my adrenaline soars time passes, who knows how long in your arms, i feel like i belong like all good things, this kiss must end but i'll never be the same person again and you may not believe me, but i swear that it's true no matter what happens, i'll always love you Jeremy |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Ahhhh the magic of a kiss...very well expressed here Jeremy. Really touching poem. Keep it up.  )Amy ~Live today as though it were your last but prepare for tomorrow as though it were here~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sensual (or is it sensuous--Christpher?) Applause forthcoming from the self-proclaimed Queen of Hedonism! |
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jeremyc Junior Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 18 |
thank you aimster...it was definitely magic and thank you serenit (i think  )) |
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