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~slow dance~

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jeremyc
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0 posted 02-23-2000 07:40 PM       View Profile for jeremyc   Email jeremyc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jeremyc

there's a slow song playing and we begin to dance
a feeling comes over me, a feeling of romance
your body's against mine and we sway side to side
there's no need for words, but nothing to hide
you press your forehead up against mine
i look in your eyes, look for a sign
i become dimly aware of my hands on your hips
but at the moment, all i see is your lips
suddenly the music fades out in the distance
if there are others around, i know not their existance
i lean in, and finally my lips meet yours
my mind is cleared, but my adrenaline soars
time passes, who knows how long
in your arms, i feel like i belong
like all good things, this kiss must end
but i'll never be the same person again
and you may not believe me, but i swear that it's true
no matter what happens, i'll always love you

      Jeremy
© Copyright 2000 Jeremy - All Rights Reserved
Aimster
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1 posted 02-23-2000 07:52 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Ahhhh the magic of a kiss...very well expressed here Jeremy. Really touching poem. Keep it up.

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Amy

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serenity blaze
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2 posted 02-23-2000 07:55 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Sensual (or is it sensuous--Christpher?)
Applause forthcoming from the self-proclaimed
Queen of Hedonism!
jeremyc
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3 posted 02-23-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for jeremyc   Email jeremyc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jeremyc

thank you aimster...it was definitely magic
and thank you serenit (i think  ))
 
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