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PoeticKnight
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0 posted 02-23-2000 06:00 PM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for PoeticKnight

Through all the years, I still think of you
My dreams, they are still about you
My mind wages war with my heart
Youíve become a memory, at least itís a start
A song, a phrase, a certain smell
Can trigger such reactions in this hell
I know that I am only mortal man
And these feet tread upon a shaky land
We sat on the hill, watching the sun go down
The joy was just having you around
Thousands of hours go by like nothing happened
The strength of your face held in my head lessened
But after the hatred and confusion dims
I wonder if youíre really happy with him
I think that maybe you think of me still
Because I know of you, I always will
Though my feelings were so strong then,
There were others before, since, and will again
I try not to compare them to you
It is simply all that I can do
Now Iím left a little stronger and wise
To view the world with not so innocent eyes
Iíd like to spend some time again with you talking,
Through the familiar paths while walking
Reminisce for a while, then say goodbye;
This time forever, as you vanish from my eye


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1 posted 02-23-2000 07:04 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Poignant and ponderous--I felt the ache.
Well done.
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 02-23-2000 07:39 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

JML~
Tender memories and thoughts.
A *HUG* for sharing.
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 02-24-2000 11:32 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

JML~ Always. You touch my heart. This is wonderful. -SEA
PoeticKnight
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4 posted 02-24-2000 11:57 AM       View Profile for PoeticKnight   Email PoeticKnight   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PoeticKnight

As always SEA, you make my day.
Janet Marie
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5 posted 02-24-2000 02:08 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

"Now Iím left a little stronger and wise
To view the world with not so innocent eyes
Iíd like to spend some time again with you talking,
Through the familiar paths while walking
Reminisce for a while, then say goodbye;
This time forever, as you vanish from my eye"

lessons of love...words of wisdom...
another one full of grace JML...
still stalking you(smile) janet marie



 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

christies heart
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6 posted 02-24-2000 05:12 PM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for christies heart

This is that once in a lifetime feeling, sometimes it comes back again. Sometimes though, just the memory of it takes through life feeling better and somehow stronger!!! love this poem!! Chris
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