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Concerning The Room With A View & The Lady In Red
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Concerning The Room With A View & The Lady In Red |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Dear Lady In Red... Concerning the room with a view... Oh no my Lady I'd not be so crass A room with a view Must have more than glass Curtains there must be To keep out the Toms Like that spud E. Fudd With the sweaty palms No indiscretion Did I wish to make Only an offer One I hope you'll take I've saved red crayons For one such as you And in privacy My masterpiece we'll do A virgin canvass Awaits your fine form To be dressed in red With smile so warm The Mona Lisa Will pale by compare Green with jealousy For your beauty there So fear not your King With room and a view For all will soon see The wonder of you Done in crayon hues To hang in the 'Stute My Lady in Red Please do not refute |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
I’m dreaming on colours red when crayons gently touch the canvas Divine inspiration fills up the room while you create with tender touch illusion Reaching out and finding the red rose that lies within the depth of me On wings of illusion we fly away from here Our castle build on nothing but feelings Every stroke your crayon makes a caress to my fragile soul Love sweet magical illogical sensation A final touch a glance you created a Masterpiece I think I am falling in love........ Juliet aka Lady in Red |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
I think I'm gonna heave...LOL [This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 02-23-2000).] |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
The world stands stark white Waiting for pigments bright Then with a lunge comes life As the colors run rife A line drawn too a curve In a profile to serve Tender strokes and great flair Fingers work in love's care Capturing the heart's view With the form that is you My Lady In Red ----- (Nurse C... feel free to heave cause you had me ROTFLMAO with that one line...  ) |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Flying on the strong winds of illusion, higher than any eagle ever flies, pushing aside all human intrusion, dreaming away until night once more dies . Building a castle on cloud number nine, enlightement through touch of the Swinging King, encounter with Crayons of such divine, fills my soul with a love, it makes it sing. Universal awareness fills my heart, with stars in my eyes I gaze at the Moon, to Mother Earth and heaven’s starry yard, I hope our path doesn’t end too soon. With tears like dewdrops we greet morning’s light, Life is worth living with the Crayon Knight. |
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Justin Tolerable Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13 |
I wisked you away From your once noble King He never even noticed He's a real ding-a-ling In a tower on high Is where you will be I'll be your Romeo And you'll worship me Don't worry my dear He won't come for you For if he does He can't pay the due It will be his life That he'd owe for your own Cause I am a Justin Right to the bone It's you that I want And you I did take The Crayon King Will always be second rate  |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I can't decide whether to ROFL, heave or pick up a box of crayons and join you all at the stute...sounds like fun |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Very good..all of these are good... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
I've gone for my sword I've gone for my shield Doc Moose is my horse Before us all yield My Lady in Red Fear not for your fate I'll slay Justin T I'm not second rate I'll storm the tower Dispatching my foe Like Sir George's worm Justin T will soe Reaching the summit I'll wisk you away Too the Corner Pub Where we'll swing and sway ----- My Lady in Red... your words are of a beauty only matched by your smile. |
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Rapunsel New Member
since 2000-02-24
Posts 9 |
Looks at the king With a gleam in her eye Picks up a crayon To give it a try Then whispers so softly Into his ear "I've a better idea Now you just stay here" She brings back some nuts Strawberries, whipped cream "I feel like a sundae, Will you be my icecream?" |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
All alone in this old tower Justin T. is here in power The world outside far away This is a most dreadful day Waiting for my crayon Knight To arrive on his Moose white Will he defeat Justin Tolerable My King of the Crayon Round Table Maybe Rapunsel he’d prefer Or a wild Nurse with a blur A promise of ice cream delight ? The other with a stormy night ? My King will not cause me pain For him I consider to go insane Please help me out of this misery Oh my goodness, I hear Justin T. ! |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Nurse Cratchet to the left Rapunsel to the right Please my Lady in Red Please save me from this plight The gauntlet I'll charge through I'll fight with white Russians Chocolate sundae hair-dos Through all their false passions All I ask is your hand To make us two a match For you my Lady Red All others I'll dispatch Lady Red I beg you Claim me your champion Please be my one true Queen Your King Stute Companion |
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Justin Spire Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13 |
Juliet, Here I ride for you all saddled up and drank a few. My horse is black and there's room for you on his back. So here I come to rescue you from that intolerable bum. I'll ride you away to my castle in time I do pray. So hop on back will ride all night I'll give you everything I'll hold nothing back. (sweet sugar of my earth) |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Crayon King, my Crayon King What hast thou done with me Whenever I do close my eyes my heart is there with thee King of East Wing at the 'Stute What hast thou done with me I feel thou whispers in my soul I wish to be with thee My Knight in shining armour What hast thou done with me Thou temper of my graving heart I long to be with thee Enchanter of the first kind What has thou done with me My heart thou hold within your spell My hand I'll cut for thee ? |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Mar not your beauty My Lady in Red Cut not one finger I'll not see you bled Please keep your fine hand Attached to the rest So I may have all To hold and caress Listen not to them Those Justins who call They are pretenders Everyone of them all I'm your one true King Ruler of the 'Stute A fact that Cratchet Can't even refute Anointed by God To carry your flame In my heart of hearts There is but your name My Lady in Red |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
My Crayon King I hear your plea My heart’s full of fear can’t you see In this tower I wait for thee Awaiting you to rescue me My heart’s full of fear can’t you see Justin T. is after your head Awaiting you to rescue me Claiming I am his Juliet Justin T. is after your head Justin Spire’s out on crusade Claiming I am his Juliet Sweet sugar of my earth, he states Justin Spire’s out on crusade This heart is filled with love for thee Sweet sugar of my earth, he states My one and only destiny This heart is filled with love for thee I do claim you my Champion My one and only destiny My King Stute true Companion I do claim you my Champion In this tower I wait for thee My King Stute true Companion My Crayon King I hear your plea Your Lady in Red Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou |
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Justin Spire Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13 |
Juliet, Sweet sugar of my earth devine sweeter than that of fine wine, your destiny of desire won't wait so my promise of love not to late. I'm outside your window can you see me, with longing eyes I need you forever to be. the sweetest sugar of my earth devine. |
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ONE FLEW OVER Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 55Cuckoos Nest |
Justin Spire give it up you sound like a lost pup(py) The crayon king will win so pop yourself now with a pin The Lady in Red is smitten as so I've seen everywhere written so ride off on that horse this cannot be your destined course. |
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Nurse Kindheart New Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 9 |
I see a major problem here and it is a big one I fear I'm on it Lady in Red no longer will you need dread this Justin Tolerable guy your time here I will buy and then you can ride off freely on the horse I rode in on Greely. I'll be Justin Tolerable's pawn until the rising sun of dawn then I will gather me a rope and dangle down it and hope I can quietly escape his tower then nobody will be in his power. |
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Justin Tolerable Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13 |
Now you ladies think me dumb, But why your faces are so glum? I spotted all your treachery, Now neither one of you are free. Your locked up in my tower high, Your hopes are set on one small guy. Give it up, he will not come, I have him right here on the run. He is a coward, can't you see? He'll never get the best of me. So ladies resign yourselves to this, We'll live here in eternal bliss. |
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Nurse Kindheart New Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 9 |
Lady in Red what did I do I meant no harm to come to you All I wanted was to set you free maybe someone can climb that tree and bring a board for a ramp from the window. Oh my goodness I see'see a giant black widow. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Justin Tolerable I'm throwing down the glove For my Lady in Red The one who is my love Justin Tolerable Prepare yourself for siege Its time you bow down to Your master and Lord Liege I've mustered my forces And not in dijon yellow I've come to cook you down Roasted like a marshmellow My crayons are all sharpened Each with a point to be made They'll color all over you You'll need more than a Band-Aid Release My Lady in Red As well as good Nurse Kindheart Or suffer the dogs of war We'll tear your tower apart You remember Ian The dog European The pet of the Wicked Witch The one who's always a peein' Ian, dog European He's a right feisty old mutt I've trained him to sniff you out And to bite right in the butt So if your carcASS you'll save You'll hand the Ladies over Do not dally in your deed Cause here comes my dog rover ---- Keep heart my Lady Red for I'm on my way. Justin Tolerable is nothing more than Alpo. Rest assured of my victory and keep the newbie nurse calm. Your Knight in Color, CK. ---- One Flew... thanks for joining the war... no matter the battle... fruits or coots I know I can count on you. Fly high buddy... fly high. [This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 02-28-2000).] |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Nurse Kindheart, please step aside So I can fight this monster black Behind me in the alcove you hide While this widow black I'll attack A crayon here, a crayon there How dare you scare her out of her wits I’ll send you off to Anny Where She’s not just another titbit My dear Nurse, do not longer fear Come out of your alcove hide The widow’s gone, that much is clear Let’s see what happens outside Oh dear, Oh my, look at my King He’s into a fight with T. ! Passion Play ! Their swords cross, while Moose sings his favourite "Walk This Way" Look at this Ian ! The dog European ! He’s taken the long short cut ! He’s about to attack the tower ! He’s peein’ ! And ready to bite some butt ! I cannot see them Anny Longer Where on earth have they gone ? I know my King will be stronger Will colour his left jaw bone I hear a loud noise right outside ! Who’s there behind the door ?!?! No Kindheart there’s no time to hide Is it my Crayon King I adore ? Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou |
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Nurse Kindheart New Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 9 |
She did not realize it happened now I am fearfully left to attend. A bite to the ankle she took I can't believe how bad she shook. Now I think she's gone into shock I've been counting minutes on this here clock forty-five have gone by since the bite and nothing seems to be quite right. She has not spoken a word to me where in the world can anyone be, hear my plea's for this Lady in Red for I fear soon she'll be good as dead. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Ladies of the tower Cast away all your fear Justin T is now slain And I, your King, am here What has happened Nurse K? What has befallen Red? Tell me she is sleeping That she does not lay dead! What is it that you say? A spider she did fight! When Red was not looking It gave her this here bite! Ian!, Dog European Come quickly my brave pet Go fetch good Doctor Moose Stop not! To make things wet I'm so sorry my Red For my arrival late Please hang in there my sweet Don't make this your fate I'd give my 'Stute Kingdom To have you back with me Nurse K please do something Don't let her spirit flee! Administer first aid Should we suck the poison? You say she was bit where? Right next to her bosom! Please stand aside Nurse K I'll handle things from here Red's life is in my mouth Is that a pulse I hear? [This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 03-01-2000).] |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
**** waking up in fury **** Oh my goodness dear King Thought you were Justin T. Felt right on my chest Something touching me That's an aweful bruise I made on your face Kind of colourful though Hope you don't need a brace Will you please forgive Your Lady in Red I never thought I' see (For she's tired now) You again after this Hell ( and wants to go to bed  ) |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Nurse Kindheart will you please attend Justin T., although he is no friend But still a brother of the ‘Stute To let him die, I must refute Justin Spire, sweet young man, My heart belongs to this Crayon man I hope you’ll comprehend May I still call you friend ? Here is my hand, I’m sorry dear In your face I struck in fear Eventhough I did not mean to Please do what you must do Colour it red, colour it blue Colour it with everlasting hues This hand from now on belongs to thee As does all of the rest of me Blue eyed Knight from East Wing One and only Crayon King Master cook of mystery stew Where do we go from here ? Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
My Dear Lady in Red Though I've suffered your hit To know my Red's alive I am hurt not one bit Though my eye is shaded A perfect hue of blue It matches that hickey That I just gave to you Now that I have you back There's but one thing to do A wedding's in order To unite me and you (getting down on one knee) I tender you privilege To all of my colors Please accept this offer Above all the others What say you my Lady Will you marry this King? And in your so doing Become my Queen East Wing |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Oh Dear.....What must I do ? Now I have to explain to you A secret of darkness After a night sleepless My answer my love, my King will be in "My King, Ruler Of The East Wing" Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou |
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Justin Spire Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13 |
Sweet sugar of my earth devine please take my hand as yours you will live in peace with thine. |
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