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Concerning The Room With A View & The Lady In Red

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Andrew Scott
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0 posted 02-23-2000 04:29 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Andrew Scott

Dear Lady In Red... Concerning the room with a view...

Oh no my Lady
I'd not be so crass
A room with a view
Must have more than glass

Curtains there must be
To keep out the Toms
Like that spud E. Fudd
With the sweaty palms

No indiscretion
Did I wish to make
Only an offer
One I hope you'll take

I've saved red crayons
For one such as you
And in privacy
My masterpiece we'll do

A virgin canvass
Awaits your fine form
To be dressed in red
With smile so warm

The Mona Lisa
Will pale by compare
Green with jealousy
For your beauty there

So fear not your King
With room and a view
For all will soon see
The wonder of you

Done in crayon hues
To hang in the 'Stute
My Lady in Red
Please do not refute

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Lady in Red
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1 posted 02-23-2000 06:18 PM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

Iím dreaming
on colours red
when crayons
gently touch
the canvas

Divine inspiration
fills up the room
while you create
with tender touch
illusion

Reaching out
and finding
the red rose
that lies within
the depth of me

On wings
of illusion
we fly
away
from here

Our castle
build
on nothing
but
feelings

Every stroke
your crayon makes
a caress
to my
fragile soul

Love
sweet
magical
illogical
sensation

A final touch
a glance
you created
a
Masterpiece


I think I am falling in love........


Juliet
aka
Lady in Red
Nurse Crachet
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2 posted 02-23-2000 06:26 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

I think I'm gonna heave...LOL

[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 02-23-2000).]
Andrew Scott
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3 posted 02-23-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

The world stands stark white
Waiting for pigments bright

Then with a lunge comes life
As the colors run rife

A line drawn too a curve
In a profile to serve

Tender strokes and great flair
Fingers work in love's care

Capturing the heart's view
With the form that is you

My Lady In Red


-----

(Nurse C... feel free to heave cause you had me ROTFLMAO with that one line...  )
Lady in Red
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4 posted 02-24-2000 03:11 PM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

Flying on the strong winds of illusion,
higher than any eagle ever flies,
pushing aside all human intrusion,
dreaming away until night once more dies .
Building a castle on cloud number nine,
enlightement through touch of the Swinging King,
encounter with Crayons of such divine,
fills my soul with a love, it makes it sing.
Universal awareness fills my  heart,
with stars in my eyes I gaze at the Moon,
to Mother Earth and heavenís starry yard,
I hope our path doesnít end too soon.
With tears like dewdrops we greet morningís light,          
Life is worth living with the Crayon Knight.

Justin Tolerable
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5 posted 02-24-2000 04:40 PM       View Profile for Justin Tolerable   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Tolerable

I wisked you away
From your once noble King
He never even noticed
He's a real ding-a-ling

In a tower on high
Is where you will be
I'll be your Romeo
And you'll worship me

Don't worry my dear
He won't come for you
For if he does
He can't pay the due

It will be his life
That he'd owe for your own
Cause I am a Justin
Right to the bone

It's you that I want
And you I did take
The Crayon King
Will always be second rate  
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 02-24-2000 07:40 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I can't decide whether to ROFL, heave or pick up a box of crayons and join you all at the stute...sounds like fun  
Poet deVine
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7 posted 02-24-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Very good..all of these are good...
Andrew Scott
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8 posted 02-24-2000 08:13 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

I've gone for my sword
I've gone for my shield
Doc Moose is my horse
Before us all yield

My Lady in Red
Fear not for your fate
I'll slay Justin T
I'm not second rate

I'll storm the tower
Dispatching my foe
Like Sir George's worm
Justin T will soe

Reaching the summit
I'll wisk you away
Too the Corner Pub
Where we'll swing and sway

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My Lady in Red... your words are of a beauty only matched by your smile.
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9 posted 02-24-2000 09:03 PM       View Profile for Rapunsel   Email Rapunsel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rapunsel

Looks at the king
With a gleam in her eye
Picks up a crayon
To give it a try

Then whispers so softly
Into his ear
"I've a better idea
Now you just stay here"

She brings back some nuts
Strawberries, whipped cream
"I feel like a sundae,
Will you be my icecream?"
Lady in Red
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10 posted 02-25-2000 02:45 PM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

All alone in this old tower
Justin T. is here in power
The world outside far away
This is a most dreadful day

Waiting for my crayon Knight
To arrive on his Moose white
Will he defeat Justin Tolerable
My King of the Crayon Round Table

Maybe Rapunsel heíd prefer
Or a wild Nurse with a blur
A promise of ice cream delight ?
The other with a stormy night ?

My King will not cause me pain
For him I consider to go insane
Please help me out of this misery
Oh my goodness, I hear Justin T. !
Andrew Scott
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11 posted 02-25-2000 05:59 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Nurse Cratchet to the left
Rapunsel to the right
Please my Lady in Red
Please save me from this plight

The gauntlet I'll charge through
I'll fight with white Russians
Chocolate sundae hair-dos
Through all their false passions

All I ask is your hand
To make us two a match
For you my Lady Red
All others I'll dispatch

Lady Red I beg you
Claim me your champion
Please be my one true Queen
Your King Stute Companion
Justin Spire
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12 posted 02-25-2000 06:48 PM       View Profile for Justin Spire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Spire

Juliet,

Here I ride for you
all saddled up
and drank a few.
My horse is black
and there's room
for you on his back.
So here I come
to rescue you
from that
intolerable bum.
I'll ride you away
to my castle
in time
I do pray.
So hop on back
will ride all night
I'll give you
everything
I'll hold nothing
back.
(sweet sugar of my earth)
Lady in Red
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13 posted 02-25-2000 07:34 PM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

Crayon King, my Crayon King
What hast thou done with me
Whenever I do close my eyes
my heart is there with thee

King of East Wing at the 'Stute
What hast thou done with me
I feel thou whispers in my soul
I wish to be with thee

My Knight in shining armour
What hast thou done with me
Thou temper of my graving heart
I long to be with thee

Enchanter of the first kind
What has thou done with me
My heart thou hold within your spell
My hand I'll cut for thee ?
Andrew Scott
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14 posted 02-25-2000 09:09 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Mar not your beauty
My Lady in Red
Cut not one finger
I'll not see you bled

Please keep your fine hand
Attached to the rest
So I may have all
To hold and caress

Listen not to them
Those Justins who call
They are pretenders
Everyone of them all

I'm your one true King
Ruler of the 'Stute
A fact that Cratchet
Can't even refute

Anointed by God
To carry your flame
In my heart of hearts
There is but your name

My Lady in Red
Lady in Red
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15 posted 02-28-2000 06:48 AM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

My Crayon King I hear your plea
My heartís full of fear canít you see
In this tower I wait for thee
Awaiting you to rescue me

My heartís full of fear canít you see
Justin T. is after your head
Awaiting you to rescue me
Claiming I am his Juliet

Justin T. is after your head
Justin Spireís out on crusade
Claiming I am his Juliet
Sweet sugar of my earth, he states

Justin Spireís out on crusade
This heart is filled with love for thee
Sweet sugar of my earth, he states
My one and only destiny

This heart is filled with love for thee
I do claim you my Champion
My one and only destiny
My King Stute true Companion

I do claim you my Champion
In this tower I wait for thee
My King Stute true Companion
My Crayon King I hear your plea

Your Lady in Red


 Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou

Justin Spire
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16 posted 02-28-2000 07:07 AM       View Profile for Justin Spire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Spire

Juliet,
Sweet sugar of my earth devine
sweeter than that of fine wine,
your destiny of desire won't wait
so my promise of love not to late.
I'm outside your window can you see me,
with longing eyes I need you forever to be.
the sweetest sugar of my earth devine.
ONE FLEW OVER
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17 posted 02-28-2000 10:56 AM       View Profile for ONE FLEW OVER   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ONE FLEW OVER

Justin Spire give it up
you sound like a lost pup(py)
The crayon king will win
so pop yourself now with a pin
The Lady in Red is smitten
as so I've seen everywhere written
so ride off on that horse
this cannot be your destined course.
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18 posted 02-28-2000 03:15 PM       View Profile for Nurse Kindheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Kindheart

I see a major problem here
and it is a big one I fear
I'm on it Lady in Red
no longer will you need dread
this Justin Tolerable guy
your time here I will buy
and then you can ride off freely
on the horse I rode in on Greely.
I'll be Justin Tolerable's pawn
until the rising sun of dawn
then I will gather me a rope
and dangle down it and hope
I can quietly escape his tower
then nobody will be in his power.
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19 posted 02-28-2000 04:35 PM       View Profile for Justin Tolerable   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Tolerable

Now you ladies think me dumb,
But why your faces are so glum?
I spotted all your treachery,
Now neither one of you are free.

Your locked up in my tower high,
Your hopes are set on one small guy.
Give it up, he will not come,
I have him right here on the run.

He is a coward, can't you see?
He'll never get the best of me.
So ladies resign yourselves to this,
We'll live here in eternal bliss.
Nurse Kindheart
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20 posted 02-28-2000 06:43 PM       View Profile for Nurse Kindheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Kindheart

Lady in Red what did I do
I meant no harm to come to you
All I wanted was to set you free
maybe someone can climb that tree
and bring a board for a ramp from the window.
Oh my goodness I see'see a giant black widow.
Andrew Scott
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21 posted 02-28-2000 08:15 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Justin Tolerable
I'm throwing down the glove
For my Lady in Red
The one who is my love

Justin Tolerable
Prepare yourself for siege
Its time you bow down to
Your master and Lord Liege

I've mustered my forces
And not in dijon yellow
I've come to cook you down
Roasted like a marshmellow

My crayons are all sharpened
Each with a point to be made
They'll color all over you
You'll need more than a Band-Aid

Release My Lady in Red
As well as good Nurse Kindheart
Or suffer the dogs of war
We'll tear your tower apart

You remember Ian
The dog European
The pet of the Wicked Witch
The one who's always a peein'

Ian, dog European
He's a right feisty old mutt
I've trained him to sniff you out
And to bite right in the butt  

So if your carcASS you'll save
You'll hand the Ladies over
Do not dally in your deed  
Cause here comes my dog rover

----

Keep heart my Lady Red for I'm on my way.  Justin Tolerable is nothing more than Alpo. Rest assured of my victory and keep the newbie nurse calm.  Your Knight in Color, CK.

----

One Flew... thanks for joining the war... no matter the battle... fruits or coots I know I can count on you. Fly high buddy... fly high.

[This message has been edited by Andrew Scott (edited 02-28-2000).]
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22 posted 02-29-2000 12:45 PM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

Nurse Kindheart, please step aside
So I can fight this monster black
Behind me in the alcove you hide
While this widow black I'll attack

A crayon here, a crayon there
How dare you scare her out of her wits
Iíll send you off to Anny Where
Sheís not just another titbit

My dear Nurse, do not longer fear
Come out of your alcove hide
The widowís gone, that much is clear
Letís see what happens outside

Oh dear, Oh my, look at my King
Heís into a fight with T. ! Passion Play !
Their swords cross,  while Moose sings
his favourite "Walk This Way"

Look at this Ian ! The dog European !
Heís taken the long short cut !
Heís about to attack the tower ! Heís peeiní !
And ready to bite some butt !

I cannot see them Anny Longer
Where on earth have they gone ?
I know my King will be stronger
Will colour his left jaw bone

I hear a loud noise right outside !
Whoís there behind the door ?!?!
No Kindheart thereís no time to hide
Is it my Crayon King I adore ?


 Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou

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23 posted 03-01-2000 10:12 AM       View Profile for Nurse Kindheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Kindheart

She did not realize it happened
now I am fearfully left to attend.
A bite to the ankle she took
I can't believe how bad she shook.
Now I think she's gone into shock
I've been counting minutes on this here clock
forty-five have gone by since the bite
and nothing seems to be quite right.
She has not spoken a word to me
where in the world can anyone be,
hear my plea's for this Lady in Red
for I fear soon she'll be good as dead.
Andrew Scott
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24 posted 03-01-2000 06:50 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Ladies of the tower
Cast away all your fear
Justin T is now slain
And I, your King, am here

What has happened Nurse K?
What has befallen Red?
Tell me she is sleeping
That she does not lay dead!

What is it that you say?
A spider she did fight!
When Red was not looking
It gave her this here bite!

Ian!, Dog European
Come quickly my brave pet
Go fetch good Doctor Moose
Stop not! To make things wet

I'm so sorry my Red
For my arrival late
Please hang in there my sweet
Don't make this your fate

I'd give my 'Stute Kingdom
To have you back with me
Nurse K please do something
Don't let her spirit flee!

Administer first aid
Should we suck the poison?
You say she was bit where?
Right next to her bosom!

Please stand aside Nurse K
I'll handle things from here
Red's life is in my mouth
Is that a pulse I hear?




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