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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Nurse Crachet banged her head Her daughter I am she said ! My life has taken the strangest turn This is the Mother for whom I yearn ? My true name is Juliet My favourite colour red Long I’ve searched for Mother dear But now my heart is filled with fear She’ll expect me to turn against The ‘Stuters I now call friends Although it means I’ll have the keys To every locked door , hurray, whoopee ! Secret trips outside these walls Or a "quiet" midnight ball Steal crayons from the safe And during day time we’ll behave  What, oh what, shall I decide ? Shall I accept, or shall I hide ? Please help me, what shall I do ? For I do not have a clue ! Is this a good time to faint ? Lady in Red aka Juliet [This message has been edited by Lady in Red (edited 02-23-2000).] |
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Danny Holloway Member Elite
since 2000-01-15
Posts 2034Tulsa, OK |
Never a good time to faint! Accept and take the ride. Nice poem and welcome to Passions! Danny |
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Justin Spire Junior Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 13 |
Lady in Red, To that which you dread, the nurse is nice I've done her twice and still she's very kind, sometimes I think she's blind. Take the keys my dear and never again fear the nurse as evil mother, the most she'll do is smother. For love she lacks and you have facts to give her instant love, just be careful not to shove. She's very possessive sometimes reaching obsessive. Take these clues along with you and you'll receive more than you are due. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
My Lady in Red Trust Nurse Cratchet Not! A leopard for sure Just look at those spots! The beauty that's you Could not come from her It's justin possible To be her blood cur Please don't take her keys I've got crayons to spare Do listen to me I'm the one who cares If it's dances you want I rule the East Wing I'll throw one each night I'm the King of swing We'll do road trips with Moose To the Corner Pub We'll hit the jukebox And rub-a-dub-dub I'll make you my Queen You don't need the Nurse Choose the Crayon King Resist the Cratchet Curse |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Dear Danny Sir....thank you for your warm welcome and your Sir, welcome to the Stute Justin Spire, I see your point of view But still I do not know what to do Please explain...you’ve done her twice ? Are you sure you do not fantasize ? My King, you ask me to resist the Nurse My mother, the wicked Crachet curse To be the Queen of the Crayon King And rule with you the ‘Stutes East Wing My dilemma is rather complicate The result not to negotiate The question is, in all it’s simplicity Do I go insane, or go for the keys ? To be your Queen, I have to be insane There’s no place here for the clinical sane Choose Crachet and the keys I will receive Help the Justins in some honest deceit The question remains, what shall I do Whatever it is ........ will I still have you ?  [This message has been edited by Lady in Red (edited 02-24-2000).] |
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Rapunsel New Member
since 2000-02-24
Posts 9 |
Lady in red Have I got a plan Seems Crayola King Just isn't your man I've got an idea Let's make it tonight I'll let down my hair And you take your flight Out of the window On the second floor No need for keys 'Cause you won't use the door Then come back and get me As fast as you can We'll search the world over 'Till we both find a man I think I found mine In the an ad in the paper If you will only Help me with this caper Did you see the ad Oh, He's perfect for me His names Chip and Dale And he dances at three At a club down the street A bar called O'Hare Lets make our escape I just have to be there Do we have a deal? What do you say? Let's make our escape And Make it today  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Just this once, I wish someone would tell me, simple, blunt, (doesn't have to be sweet) "just what in the hell is going on here?" Well. Welcome to the forum. And typing from experience, I'd have copies of those keys made...one never knows... |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
My Lady in Red Please make up your mind If its keys you want You can have all of mine My Lady in Red Please decide real soon My heart is breaking Pity this King loon Cratchets not your mom She lies, can't you see She wants me herself To be the Queen Bee I can't give you up My Lady in Red Please don't listen to What Nurse Cratchet said As for Repunsal With all of her hair Throw her some scissors And leave her right there If its Chip & Dale That you are seeking I've got two chipmunks In the kitchen keeping As to state of mind That is the question To be or not to be? In which direction No matter your choice The King remains true Go nuts or stay sane I'll always love you |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Serenity...I'm with you on this one. I've avoided posting on the "stutes" and the "medical professionals", etc. because they seem all too relative. AND THIS IS OKAY WITH EVERYONE? Maybe if I was in on the game, it wouldn't seem so "invaisive" to me. Let's see...if I dare keep count...the nurse person, the moose who is a doctor, the Justins (who should together be Justin Straight jackets), now Red Lady....and dare I think Mystery, too? Am I missing many? Or am I the only person in here with no other alter egos? Just Curious (notice, that was NOT a Justin). |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Would never have meant to say anything harsh... Claire [This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 02-27-2000).] |
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Lady in Red Member
since 2000-02-16
Posts 147 |
Hmmm, let's see, there's Doc Moose and Nurse Crachet, Justin Thyme, Justin Kace, Justine Uff, Justin Credible, Justin Sayne, Justin Nuendo, Justin Tolerable, Justin Spire, Justin Genious, Justin Consistant, Justin Trouble, Leonardo da Vinci, Vincent van Gogh, Anny Thyme, Elmer Fudd, The Tin Man, Miss Behavin', Rapunsel, ONE FLEW OVER, Normal Rockwell, A. Vertyser, Menage # 1 and of course Menage Numero Trois, Unknown Poet, Bashful, Bugs Bunny, Tweety, Sylvester and of course our Crayon King, Andrew Scott.....the list goes on and on.....would you like me to continue ? Excuse me for saying......an alter ego you must have, as I don't think January Flowers is your real name and uhhh....I almost forgot.....didn't you know it is Passions policy NOT to post negative comment ? (I do not recall twisting your arm to read this) We may be crazy, but we live by the rules ! Lady in Red < !signature--> Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou [This message has been edited by Lady in Red (edited 02-26-2000).] |
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Justin Sayne Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 53 |
You think perhaps I'm Justin Sayne Justin Straight jackets too.. U Shirley Jest, that's sooo Mundane Our numbers' none too few... How could we then pursue Lost Dreams Ain' Miss Behavin' there No need for Head-to-ToeRags seems We sneak out fair and square. One thing's Justin Conceivable Our 'stute sans JoyfulNess Come one, come all - but heed the rule Our 'stute's for SilliNess |
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Justin Nuendo Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 86Ozzz |
My dear Lady in Red Hope this won't get ya mad but with the King outta town Is it safe to bring ya this "blue" gown ? What's going on up here ? Bit of a nasty atmosphere ! Lady ya need a shoulder to cry ? Remember I'm always close by. |
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Nurse Kindheart New Member
since 2000-02-27
Posts 9 |
My, my why are some people so mean that January person scared me, she was shouting to loudly. Does she live here at the Stute also, please someone needs to clue this new nurse in how many do I have to take under my wing? [This message has been edited by Nurse Kindheart (edited 02-27-2000).] |
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