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Lady in Red
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since 02-16-2000
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0 posted 02-23-2000 02:19 PM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

Nurse Crachet banged her head
Her daughter I am she said !
My life has taken the strangest turn
This is the Mother for whom I yearn ?

My true name is Juliet
My favourite colour red
Long I’ve searched for Mother  dear
But now my heart is filled with fear

She’ll expect me to turn against
The ‘Stuters I now call friends
Although it means I’ll have the keys
To every locked door , hurray, whoopee !

Secret trips outside these walls
Or a "quiet" midnight ball
Steal crayons from the safe
And during day time we’ll behave    

What, oh what, shall I decide ?
Shall I accept, or shall I hide ?
Please help me, what shall I do ?
For I do not have a clue !


Is this a good time to faint ?


Lady in Red
    aka
   Juliet




[This message has been edited by Lady in Red (edited 02-23-2000).]
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Danny Holloway
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1 posted 02-23-2000 02:51 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Never a good time to faint!  Accept and take the ride.
Nice poem and welcome to Passions!
Danny
Justin Spire
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since 02-19-2000
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2 posted 02-23-2000 03:02 PM       View Profile for Justin Spire   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Spire

Lady in Red,
To that which you dread,
the nurse is nice
I've done her twice
and still she's very kind,
sometimes I think she's blind.
Take the keys my dear
and never again fear
the nurse as evil mother,
the most she'll do is smother.
For love she lacks
and you have facts
to give her instant love,
just be careful not to shove.
She's very possessive
sometimes reaching obsessive.
Take these clues along with you
and you'll receive more than you are due.
Andrew Scott
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since 06-24-99
Posts 2655
Redlands,CA,USA


3 posted 02-23-2000 04:56 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

My Lady in Red
Trust Nurse Cratchet Not!
A leopard for sure
Just look at those spots!

The beauty that's you
Could not come from her
It's justin possible
To be her blood cur

Please don't take her keys
I've got crayons to spare
Do listen to me
I'm the one who cares

If it's dances you want
I rule the East Wing
I'll throw one each night
I'm the King of swing

We'll do road trips with Moose
To the Corner Pub
We'll hit the jukebox
And rub-a-dub-dub

I'll make you my Queen
You don't need the Nurse
Choose the Crayon King
Resist the Cratchet Curse
Lady in Red
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4 posted 02-24-2000 02:58 PM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

Dear Danny Sir....thank you for your warm welcome
and your Sir, welcome to the Stute

Justin Spire, I see your point of view
But still I do not know what to do

Please explain...you’ve done her twice ?
Are you sure you do not fantasize ?

My King, you ask me to resist the Nurse
My mother, the wicked Crachet curse

To be the Queen of the Crayon King
And rule with you the ‘Stutes East Wing

My dilemma is rather complicate
The result not to negotiate

The question is, in all it’s simplicity
Do I go insane, or go for the keys ?

To be your Queen, I have to be insane
There’s no place here for the clinical sane

Choose Crachet and the keys I will receive
Help the Justins in some honest deceit

The question remains, what shall I do
Whatever it is ........     will I still have you ?    



[This message has been edited by Lady in Red (edited 02-24-2000).]
Rapunsel
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5 posted 02-24-2000 08:46 PM       View Profile for Rapunsel   Email Rapunsel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Rapunsel

Lady in red
Have I got a plan
Seems Crayola King
Just isn't your man

I've got an idea
Let's make it tonight
I'll let down my hair
And you take your flight

Out of the window
On the second floor
No need for keys
'Cause you won't use the door

Then come back and get me
As fast as you can
We'll search the world over
'Till we both find a man

I think I found mine
In the an ad in the paper
If you will only
Help me with this caper

Did you see the ad
Oh, He's perfect for me
His names Chip and Dale
And he dances at three

At a club down the street
A bar called O'Hare
Lets make our escape
I just have to be there

Do we have a deal?
What do you say?
Let's make our escape
And Make it today  

serenity blaze
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6 posted 02-24-2000 10:15 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Just this once, I wish someone would tell me,
simple, blunt, (doesn't have to be sweet)
"just what in the hell is going on here?"

Well.  Welcome to the forum.  And typing from
experience, I'd have copies of those keys made...one never knows...
Andrew Scott
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7 posted 02-25-2000 08:48 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

My Lady in Red
Please make up your mind
If its keys you want
You can have all of mine

My Lady in Red
Please decide real soon
My heart is breaking
Pity this King loon

Cratchets not your mom
She lies, can't you see
She wants me herself
To be the Queen Bee

I can't give you up
My Lady in Red
Please don't listen to
What Nurse Cratchet said

As for Repunsal
With all of her hair
Throw her some scissors
And leave her right there

If its Chip & Dale
That you are seeking
I've got two chipmunks
In the kitchen keeping

As to state of mind
That is the question
To be or not to be?
In which direction

No matter your choice
The King remains true
Go nuts or stay sane
I'll always love you
January Flowers
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since 02-01-2000
Posts 217
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8 posted 02-25-2000 10:47 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Serenity...I'm with you on this one.  I've avoided posting on the "stutes" and the "medical professionals", etc. because they seem all too relative.  AND THIS IS OKAY WITH EVERYONE?  Maybe if I was in on the game, it wouldn't seem so "invaisive" to me.  Let's see...if I dare keep count...the nurse person, the moose who is a doctor, the Justins (who should together be Justin Straight jackets), now Red Lady....and dare I think Mystery, too?  Am I missing many?  Or am I the only person in here with no other alter egos?

Just Curious (notice, that was NOT a Justin).
Meadowmuse
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9 posted 02-25-2000 10:58 PM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Would never have meant to say anything harsh...

Claire



[This message has been edited by Meadowmuse (edited 02-27-2000).]
Lady in Red
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10 posted 02-26-2000 10:03 AM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

Hmmm, let's see, there's Doc Moose and Nurse Crachet, Justin Thyme, Justin Kace, Justine Uff, Justin Credible, Justin Sayne, Justin Nuendo, Justin Tolerable, Justin Spire, Justin Genious, Justin Consistant, Justin Trouble, Leonardo da Vinci, Vincent van Gogh, Anny Thyme, Elmer Fudd, The Tin Man, Miss Behavin', Rapunsel, ONE FLEW OVER, Normal Rockwell, A. Vertyser, Menage # 1 and of course Menage Numero Trois, Unknown Poet, Bashful, Bugs Bunny, Tweety, Sylvester and of course our Crayon King, Andrew Scott.....the list goes on and on.....would you like me to continue ?        
Excuse me for saying......an alter ego you must have, as I don't think January Flowers is your real name and uhhh....I almost forgot.....didn't you know it is Passions policy NOT to post negative comment ? (I do not recall twisting your arm to read this)
We may be crazy, but we live by the rules !

Lady in Red        


 Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou





[This message has been edited by Lady in Red (edited 02-26-2000).]
Justin Sayne
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11 posted 02-26-2000 10:34 AM       View Profile for Justin Sayne   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for Justin Sayne

You think perhaps I'm Justin Sayne
Justin Straight jackets too..
U Shirley Jest, that's sooo Mundane
Our numbers' none too few...

How could we then pursue Lost Dreams
Ain' Miss Behavin' there
No need for Head-to-ToeRags seems
We sneak out fair and square.

One thing's Justin Conceivable
Our 'stute sans JoyfulNess
Come one, come all - but heed the rule
Our 'stute's for SilliNess


Justin Nuendo
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since 02-05-2000
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12 posted 02-27-2000 04:10 PM       View Profile for Justin Nuendo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justin Nuendo's Home Page   View IP for Justin Nuendo

My dear Lady in Red
Hope this won't get ya mad
but with the King outta town
Is it safe to bring ya this "blue" gown ?

What's going on up here ?
Bit of a nasty atmosphere !
Lady ya need a shoulder to cry ?
Remember I'm always close by.
Nurse Kindheart
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13 posted 02-27-2000 07:01 PM       View Profile for Nurse Kindheart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Kindheart

My, my why are some people so mean
that January person scared me,
she was shouting to loudly.
Does she live here at the Stute also,
please someone needs to clue this new nurse in
how many do I have to take under my wing?

[This message has been edited by Nurse Kindheart (edited 02-27-2000).]
 
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