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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 2000-02-23 01:26 PM


You Saw Me

I placed a worn out smile
upon my face
and pretended to be happy.
You saw beyond my mask
and supported me
through my pain.

I dried mascara tears
from reddened eyes
and told you
everything was fine.
You looked past
my clever disguise
and offered a shoulder
upon which to cry.

I painted a badge
of courage
upon my chest...
bravery my farce.
You held my hand
and gave me strength
when I was frightened.

I stood tall
and tried to walk alone;
when I could barely take a step.
You picked me up
and carried me
on the wings of friendship.

You looked beyond
the surface
to see what was inside,
what I had tried to hide;
and in doing so
you helped me
to see myself.

Marilyn was kind enough to inspire this and she has been such a strength to me through a lot...but I also need to dedicate this to some other friends here and oh I hate to start naming names for fear of missing someone but I'll try...this also goes out to (in no particular order) Gloria, Denise, Maree, Rebecca, Shannon, Sharon, Nancy, Michael, Kamla, Chris, Liz, Tara, Munda...thank you all for your support, your compassion and your strength as of late
All of passions and everyone else I may have forgotten...thank you for your continued support and your prayers...you are a remarkable group of people  


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 Have you ever noticed
That the words...
"Goodbye"
"I'm sorry"
"I love you"
Are so easy to pronounce
...Yet so hard to say
~Javan




[This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 02-23-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-02-23 01:39 PM


Beautiful poem, Ruth, and a testament to true friendshsip.
Denise
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2 posted 2000-02-23 01:39 PM


Beautiful and touching, Ruth. What a lovely tribute to a lovely friend!  

Denise

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3 posted 2000-02-23 01:51 PM


Very heartwarming Ruth, as are my thoughts of you.
Denise
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4 posted 2000-02-23 02:04 PM


Thank you, Ruth! What are friends for?! Love ya!

Denise

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5 posted 2000-02-23 02:10 PM


Ruth, Another beautiful masterpiece from your sparkling mind. I'm honored to have you as a friend also, you've given me much inspiration since I've known you. You are one fine lady with a heart of gold. I pray we are friends for a life time.
Danny Holloway
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6 posted 2000-02-23 02:39 PM


A wonderful friendshiop poem!
Hope all is well...
Danny

Marilyn
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7 posted 2000-02-23 04:07 PM


For you my friend I am always here. I hope things went well today and I wish I coul dhave been there for you. ((hugs)) my friend. I do know you are here for me as I am for you but cyber hugs don't don't cut it sometimes my friend. I wish I could encircle you with my strength now (what's left of it).
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8 posted 2000-02-23 07:36 PM


Ruth~
You are a friend to many, dear.
This poem is a lovely expression of
why we care for you.
Be well, my friend.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2000-02-24 08:55 AM


This is what friendship is all about. Hearing not only what our friend says but what our friend doesn't say.... thanks, Ruth! And again, you are in my prayers.
hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 2000-02-24 09:52 AM


Thank you everyone  
WhtDove
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11 posted 2000-02-24 10:39 AM


Ruth this is sweet! Thank you hon, that's what friends are for. To help you when you're down, and when you're not!  God bless you!
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12 posted 2000-02-24 12:41 PM


Ruth this is a beautiful poem, as you are a beautiful person. (((((HUGS)))))


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13 posted 2000-02-24 02:02 PM


beautiful poem lady, perfect tribute to those wonderful people that we are lucky to call friends  
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14 posted 2000-02-24 02:48 PM


Very nice hoot own.  Yes those kinds of friends are priceless.   James
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15 posted 2000-02-24 08:04 PM


we all care Hoot, you know why?  For you are such a special person, we all see the true heart in you.  *HUGS*

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)



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16 posted 2000-02-24 09:48 PM


Ruth Hun,this is really lovely thank you, I'm here for you anytime.That's what friends are for   You're always in my thoughts Ruth. Be well Hun. *hugs*

 What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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17 posted 2000-02-24 11:32 PM


this poem was deep in meaning, it really seemed very sincere in how you expressed yourself..this special someone must be someone truly special  
tracie66
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18 posted 2000-02-25 05:56 AM


Ruth a beautiful poem written for such wonderful friends..I too hope everything is well..HUGS  
Compgirl
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19 posted 2000-02-25 09:33 AM


You reminded me of many friends today that have done the same for me. What a nice way to say "thank you." I am sure that you brought joy to many hearts with this one as you have done to mine.
Pepper
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20 posted 2000-02-25 12:01 PM


Such a lovely expression of friendship .....  We all love you Ruth ....
Beautiful piece sweetheart ...

hoot_owl_rn
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21 posted 2000-02-25 02:26 PM


Thank you so much everyone...for everything  
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