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Dancin' Frenzy

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mystery
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0 posted 02-23-2000 12:28 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery


Tuning out the crowd
Lost in a mind of my own
I visualize a better place
One where the world wouldn't disown me
Where people don't point
When I walk down the street
And where men wouldn't holler out names
That didn't belong to me
Where mothers wouldn't grab their young
When I presented a smile
Where I wasn't judged for what I do
But my reasons for doing such
Then reality sets in
As the obstreperous music awakes me
And sweaty palms annoy me
The sight of perverts touching themselves
And begging for more, while paying less
On my ass and chest they want to caress
The bodyguard approaches to calm down the wild
He's fully understanding and knows my profile
If I could make this much money
Flipping burgers, then I would
But for Tablestops I get highly educated
So the outcome is good
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mystery
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1 posted 02-23-2000 12:32 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery




I HAVEN'T ACTUALLY EXPERIENED THIS, BUT I KNOW SOMEONE THAT HAS, AND THIS IS THE WAY THAT SHE FELT,SHE REALLY DIDN'T HAVE THE FUNDS TO GO TO COLLEGE BUT DISCOVERED A FAST WAY TO GET THEM., I BELIEVE THAT THERE ARE A LOT OF WOMEN THAT STRIP AND DON'T LIKE IT AT ALL, BUT IT IS A QUICK WAY TO GET MONEY.
AND IF IT IS TO BENEFIT ONE IN THE FUTURE THEN I FINF I NO PROBLEMS IN DOING SO.
(just my opinion)
Nurse Crachet
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2 posted 02-23-2000 12:55 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Sorry, bump on head.

[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 02-23-2000).]
serenity blaze
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3 posted 02-23-2000 01:17 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I, too, know a few 'dancers'.  It's not
a place for a caring, intelligent woman to
be...hope she finds somethings else soon.
Therapy can be expensive.
mystery
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4 posted 02-23-2000 01:24 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery

To Serenity, your words are so true, but the good thing is that she hasn't made a career out of it, today she is a successful graduate with a business and an honest job.
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5 posted 02-23-2000 01:28 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

I do so love happy endings!  thanks.
 
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