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The Golden Wish

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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 02-23-2000 09:32 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

The Golden Wish

Iíve got money in my pocket
Iíve got wind upon my sails
Iíve got golden rainbow wishes
Guiding me on moonlit trails

Let the oceanís sparkling waters
Carry me to far off lands
Iíve got visions waiting to be
Written by my poet hands  

I will never stop believing
In those precious golden dreams
At times the hourglass of life
Can empty faster than it seems

So sail away, my dreamerís vessel
I think love has just begun
Let us sail away together
Til the hour of rising sun

You and I alone in pleasure
Drifting on the cresting sea
Is it real or just a vision
Are you really here with me

If this love is just a dream
Then dreamer I will always be
And I will drift forever on the
Golden wish of you and me




[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 02-23-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Corinne
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1 posted 02-23-2000 10:28 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

What a magical escape, thanks, Elizabeth!


Corinne
WhtDove
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2 posted 02-23-2000 10:31 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Breath taking Liz! I seem to have missed your answers if you answered my questions...but how is your husband doing???

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 02-23-2000 12:53 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
You grabed the golden ring on this one.
An exquisite poem. Love Sy
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 02-23-2000 01:07 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Never stop dreaming my dear friend   Beautiful poem  
Balladeer
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5 posted 02-23-2000 01:09 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

A wonderful, uplifting poem, Elizabeth
Danny Holloway
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6 posted 02-23-2000 01:11 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

This is a great line...
"At times the hourglass of life can empty faster than it seems".
Also, "drift forever on the Golden wish of you and me".
Now this is poetry!!!!!!!
Danny
Beki
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7 posted 02-23-2000 01:39 PM       View Profile for Beki   Email Beki   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Beki

Delightful read, Elizabeth..almost like an old fashioned traveling song!  
Denise
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8 posted 02-23-2000 01:50 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful wishes, Elizabeth!  

Denise
wave
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Elizabeth..

Let me tell you a secret..

To never ever
know your lover
is love forever

Captain


Elizabeth Santos
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10 posted 02-23-2000 03:10 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Thank you for your lovely responses and Wave, for your most interesting remark
Thanks
Liz

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 02-23-2000).]
January Flowers
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Your poems are always so inspirational and uplifting, Liz...this one certainly deserves to be moved up on "happy Friday".  

Beautiful words, as always!
tracie66
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12 posted 02-25-2000 08:35 PM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

A golden dream of a golden wish
of a love so warm and true
this poem is a golden dream
of a wish that warms you through....sweet words about a golden wish a wish we all dream....tracie
Martie
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13 posted 02-25-2000 08:46 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I'm sorry I missed this before.  You write so beautifully Liz, I don't want to miss a thing.
Elizabeth Santos
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14 posted 02-25-2000 08:51 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

January Flowers, thank you for reading poems that have slipped on through. I appreciate your comments
Liz

Tracie, I'm glad that a lot of poets are dreamers and can uderstand my poetry.
Thank you for the beautiful response
Liz

Martie, It's very easy to miss poems. Thank yuo for reading and commenting. Will write you soon
Liz
Liz
ESP
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Floating gently on a cloud....


15 posted 04-28-2000 07:15 AM       View Profile for ESP   Email ESP   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ESP

Another gem from the hand and heart of a wonderful poet. A joy to read!!

Love and hugs,
Lizzie


 "Poetry is the true expression of my soul, it is my ultimate means of communication. It is my rainbow of delight."
 
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