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An empty space is this place....take me back please

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tracie66
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The still water silenced me, taking me back to a place far away
A place so long ago, a place I could not say

I am a part of a time with no beginning and now no end
A lost time, a time I could not lend

Send me back
Set me free
Send me home again

Take me with you
Help me out
Take away my pain

I long for a time and place where everything is as it seems
A time of loving memories of rainbows and sunbeams

A place where the birds fly free and all creatures are at peace
Take me back I beg of you, take me halfway at least

Halfway would do for now
Take me back
Please
Somehow


[This message has been edited by tracie66 (edited 02-24-2000).]
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1 posted 02-23-2000 07:30 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tracie~
Such longing in this piece.

Return you now to that place
which you desire ...
halfway there,
the rest is but a step in time.
~*Marge*~


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2 posted 02-23-2000 12:43 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery

I like this poem, sometimes we'd give anything to go to that peaceful place when things go haywire. But is heaven right her on earth?
Something to think about!!!
tracie66
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Marge
I have so much admiration for you, your words are always so wise and thoughtful. Thanks for your reply they are always welcomed and appreciated.  
tracie66
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mystery thanks for replying. I think heaven's right here at passions, with so many poeple caring and joking with each other it's just fantastic...once again thanks
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tracie, this poem is emotionally beautiful,
and i agree with you..this place is special.. i feel like I was given a gift when I found it. take care, janet marie

 ...there are places inside all our souls...
that have never been touched...
there are places inside our hearts...
that need to be loved this much...
Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

tracie66
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Janet Marie thanks for your reply, I'm glad you liked this   thanks
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Tracie...such longing in you words...sometimes we can't go back, but you agreeing to meet halfway is a very good start  
tracie66
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Ruth thanks for your reply, always a pleasure to see your name in a reply post, Halfway is a good start isn't it...
 
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