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jbowie
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BANGOR (that OR) ME

0 posted 2000-02-23 12:28 PM



the scent of dirty clothes drifts
as a lazy dog turns in circles
the red rimmed man has tired eyes
which always settle on my hands
they are filled with the devils work
even though they hardly stop moving
but the eyes never waiver
as I pull;
the noose cracks

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with you
1 posted 2000-02-23 12:32 PM


jbowie~ Wow! This gave me the creeps! Gotta love that! -SEA
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2 posted 2000-02-23 12:46 PM


This was written with a paintbrush.  Incredible.
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