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Just Let me be!

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just_another_fe
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MICHIGAN


0 posted 02-22-2000 11:31 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

I USE TO CRY
EVERYNIGHT
I'D LAY IN BED
HOLDIN MY PILLOW TIGHT.
I'D CRY SO HARD
I COULD BARELY BREATH.
YOU WERE BREAKING MY HEART
BUT I COULDN'T LEAVE.
LAST NIGHT YOU SAID YOU LOVE HER.
THAT WAS THE LAST STRAW.
WHEN YOU SAID THEM WORDS
I FELT MY HEART FALL.
I DIDN'T CRY THEN
BUT THIS MORNING A TEAR FELL.
JUST LIKE THAT
I ESCAPED FROM YOUR EVIL SPELL!
IT'S OVER NOW
NO YOU AND ME.
YOU "LOVE" HER
SO I LET YOU BE.
THAT'S NOT WHAT YOU WANT?
YOU COULDA FOOLED ME.
JUST LEAVE ME ALONE
AND LET ME BE!!!!


© Copyright 2000 Angie - All Rights Reserved
January Flowers
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since 02-01-2000
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1 posted 02-22-2000 11:39 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

(*holds up a wine glass full of apple juice*)
CHEERS!
To moving forward!
Liked this poem!
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with you


2 posted 02-23-2000 12:36 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

j_a_f~ this is really strong! I really like it. Great job! -SEA
PREACH
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since 02-07-2000
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3 posted 02-23-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for PREACH   Email PREACH   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for PREACH

I feel your pain completely, the last cry is the hardest of them all.  But when that last cry is let out it wipes away the things that keeps you from being able to let go of love and reveals all. sorry about the rhyme (did not mean to do that) I love this poem for what it means to me and keep that pen going i will be looking foward to reading some more of your work.
just_another_fe
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4 posted 02-23-2000 02:57 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

FLOWERS: thanks im trying to move on i still love him and its hard but at least im tryin i guess   *cheers* thanx

SEA: thank you  

PREACH: im sorry that you feel my pain i wish that on no one. thanx for reading and i will continue writing  
tracie66
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since 01-18-2000
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Victoria, Australia


5 posted 02-24-2000 07:11 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

a new life is ahead of you and once more you'll be happy soon enough...HUGS   tracie
JamesMichael
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since 11-16-1999
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA


6 posted 02-24-2000 03:14 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

You really express your feelings so beautifully.  I hope you can find a loving man and dry up all those tears.  James
just_another_fe
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7 posted 02-25-2000 02:15 PM       View Profile for just_another_fe   Email just_another_fe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit just_another_fe's Home Page   View IP for just_another_fe

Tracie thanx *hugz*
James thanx and im tryin
 
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