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HafYue
New Member
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4


0 posted 2000-02-22 11:08 PM


hands of an angel
i long to hold
only Your fingertips
can warm my cold

skin of silk
i long to caress
in this world of anger
You calm my distress

lips of velvet
i long to kiss
were i to release You
my life would be amiss

do You feel the same?
it may never be known
Your world of silence
might never be shown

'tis a tormented life...
these emotions to unfetter
with not Your hand
my heart will shatter

so much to give
so much to gain
a lifetime together
would never bring pain

only forever
can my heart be true
on earth and in Heaven
this i promise to You

for now and for always
for You, i will be
simply listen to Your heart
there i am waiting...for You and for Me

"All this love to give and no one to Give it to, then I'll wait" - HafYue

© Copyright 2000 HafYue - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-22 11:30 PM


this is  wonderful expressive work..
a emotion filled LOVE poem...
very nice...
take care, janet marie

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-02-23 02:15 AM


This is a lover's prayer...genuine and sweet.
tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
3 posted 2000-02-23 03:20 AM


A lovely heartfelt poem....
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