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Of Multi-colored Things With Wings(according to Forest Green)

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Dr.Moose1
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0 posted 02-22-2000 09:07 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Umber burning chestnut tree
Andrew draws his crayons
Violet pales and turns to rose
According to his plans

Forest green as yet un-seen
Blends into the brush
While Turquoise covers up her toys
And runs off with a blush

Cinnamon who's always fun
Decides to make the scene
She takes it slow with Indigo
If you know what I mean

Black and Blue who've had a few
Fall down to the ground
While smoke of many different hues
Circles all around

Every flying thing it touched
Was painted up brand new
You won't believe it all that much
But it even got "One Flew"

Gray and Pink , no-one thinks , too much about those two
Fed Red a grape , who with mouth agape , choked 'till he was blue
Orange was peeled , his fate was sealed
The whole bunch got quite stewed

All but Forest who knew the scorest
And stayed well out of view
And to this day by flowing streams
He tells this tale in waking dreams
Of multi-colored things with wings
And the one they call " The Crayon King"



[This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 02-22-2000).]
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Janet Marie
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1 posted 02-22-2000 09:17 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie



this poem is BEAUTIFUL  your an artist with your pen!!!
take care, janet marie

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

Nurse Crachet
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2 posted 02-22-2000 09:24 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Well, Dr. Moose it's good to see your still around. You missed a lot you know, but things will be back to normal before you even know. Interesting poem you paint here.
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3 posted 02-22-2000 09:45 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Dr.Moose~
This is absolutely adorable.
I am enjoying what you write.

~*Marge*~



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Alwye
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4 posted 02-22-2000 11:07 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

For a girl with a crayon obsession, this is perfect!  So creative!  I love it!  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~

Dr.Moose1
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5 posted 02-25-2000 10:56 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Against my better judgement I'm going to bump this up once to see if "The King" catches it this time
Doc
Poet deVine
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6 posted 02-26-2000 06:38 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Wonderfully done!!! Must have been hard to do too!
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 02-26-2000 10:29 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Lovely poem, full of color.
Enjoyable reading
Liz
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I think I saw the "The King" at the zoo the other day trying to get his crayons back from the monkeys.  You are so colorful sir Doc. and I liked the colorful characters in your poem.  
Lady in Red
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9 posted 02-28-2000 06:58 AM       View Profile for Lady in Red   Email Lady in Red   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Lady in Red's Home Page   View IP for Lady in Red

What a colourful, creative, royal poem Doc. I'll bring this up for you, so our King will catch it this time.  

 Romeo, Romeo, where fart art thou

Justin Consistant
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10 posted 02-28-2000 07:37 AM       View Profile for Justin Consistant   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Justin Consistant

What a poem Doc.
never realized
you to have
so many colors
in your bag.
To bad the Nurse
can't see your colors
but I saw her
on the news in the Pub
spouting something
about a Rocky Ledge.
I'm not sure about her lately,
our you all safe in here?
ONE FLEW OVER
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11 posted 02-28-2000 10:28 AM       View Profile for ONE FLEW OVER   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ONE FLEW OVER

Dr. Moose I'm here in splendid colors
like these orange pants with purple flowers,
how about this fuchsia shirt with black stripes?
The black seemed to match with the stove pipes
I'm wearing casually with this green hat on my head.
I have my turquoise socks laid carefully out on the bed,
but the best of all is the red with white polka dotted underwear
which underneath I conspicuously have hidden a pink bow knotted.
Justin Nuendo
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Shhhhhhh.....Don't ya dare tell 'em all, but I kinda love this one.....gonna tell me a bedtime story tonite ?
Meadowmuse
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Enjoyed the humour and waxing creativity in this piece...

~ Claire
Andrew Scott
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14 posted 02-28-2000 05:59 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Doctor Moose, I was speechless
By the colors you did draw
I laid down all my crayons
And stood there in utter awe

Never have I seen such shades
Within my Crayola Box
Only once I eyed such hues
On a Scotsman's argyle socks

Doctor Moose you have my thanks
For this rainbow of wonder
The pot of gold at it's end
Are the responses under
Dr.Moose1
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15 posted 02-29-2000 06:52 PM       View Profile for Dr.Moose1   Email Dr.Moose1   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dr.Moose1

Rather than reply seperately , my thanks to you all . Glad you liked .
Doc
Justin Nuendo
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16 posted 03-03-2000 06:34 PM       View Profile for Justin Nuendo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justin Nuendo's Home Page   View IP for Justin Nuendo

Hiya Doc, long thyme no see. Where are ya these day ? We sort of need ya in the "stute ya know, or are ya only doing fancy hopitals these days ? It don't matter to me, but somethin' very weird goin' on with Kindheart and Crachet. They may need medical advise, so uhhh if it's not too much to ask and ya can find some spare thyme......will it help if I say please ?   OK PLEASE ???? PLEASE ????
PRETTY PLEASE PLEASE ?
Well, gotto go...I was really looking for those magic books, seen 'em anywhere ?
Better check the bathrooms, ya never know with all these loonies round here.
See ya around Doc.  
 
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