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Fishing With a Brother

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Xcaliber
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0 posted 02-22-2000 08:46 PM       View Profile for Xcaliber   Email Xcaliber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Xcaliber

For many day`s I`ve read
One poem after another,
And even today it remind`s me
Of fishing with my brother,

You cast out your line
so that your bobber will pop,
With a smile you reel it in
and bring it to the top,

Sometimes it`s a angelfish
and sometime`s it`s an eel,
Sometime`s it`s so ugly
Your not sure how to feel,

For those that catch the eel
I hope you`ll write another,
And know that when you fish with me
Your fishing with your brother.



[This message has been edited by Xcaliber (edited 02-22-2000).]
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Janet Marie
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1 posted 02-22-2000 09:25 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

this is great..fun and imaginative..very creative. I enjoyed this.
take care janet marie

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

Xcaliber
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2 posted 02-23-2000 04:54 PM       View Profile for Xcaliber   Email Xcaliber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Xcaliber

Thank you Janet.
I was just trying to show a happier side of my writing.
serenity blaze
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3 posted 02-23-2000 06:58 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Liked this much--

"sometimes it's an angelfish,
sometimes it's an eel..."

I am never sure what it is I'm reeling in,
until it's posted.  But this--angelfish,
for sure.
 
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