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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-02-22 07:44 PM


     The time of conceive

If all the world is just a stage
And all my life is just a page.
Then I would shine this page with light
And burn a candle in the night.

Against the dark of oppression,
Open my heart to confession.
Light a path to freedoms cause,
Make my love a permanent pause.

I'd give and take what is my due.
Not reach the heights upon a few.
I'd try my very level best,
To be a pure and proper guest.

I'd offer all that came my way,
A proper ear and place to stay.
And when your honor sews the deed
There seems to be no other need.

There is nought else but to believe.
If human trust is to conceive.


© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Martie
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1 posted 2000-02-22 07:53 PM


Sy, you do sign a page with light, again and again....and I, for one, am glad.
Elizabeth Santos
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2 posted 2000-02-22 08:19 PM


A pure and proper guest you have already been, dear friend
And an amazing poet
Beautiful thoughts and verses
Liz

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2000-02-22 09:31 PM


this poem is perfection...you certainly did light up the page...beautiful expression.
very well written, take care, janet marie

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


Marge Tindal
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4 posted 2000-02-22 09:51 PM


Seymour~
You've graced the stage of life
with elegance and light.
Conception of the thoughts within
your mind ... are brilliantly brought
to life.

Masterfully done.
Loads of love ~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Balladeer
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5 posted 2000-02-22 09:56 PM


This is excellent, Sy.  
Corinne
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6 posted 2000-02-23 12:12 PM


What a delight this poem is!  Such caring and goodness radiating out of each line!

Thank you for sharing this!

Corinne

Michael
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7 posted 2000-02-23 01:24 AM


Beautiful words, Sy.  Lovely message within.


Michael

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2000-02-23 01:29 PM


Martie, Your the greatest. *L*

Elizabeth, You are a friend and a love. Thank you. Love Sy

Janet, I love your work too. Thank you.

Marge, You say the nicest things. *L*

Balladeer, excellent form you is an eagle feather in my hat. Thanks.

Corinne, Thank you, you shine pretty good yourself. *L*

Michael, Beautiful words form a fine poet, thank you.

Denise
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9 posted 2000-02-23 01:59 PM


This is wonderful, Sy! Such lovely thoughts!

Denise

Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2000-02-23 09:13 PM


Denise,
Thank you so much for the lovely comment. *L*

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