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Xcaliber Junior Member
since 2000-02-22
Posts 12 |
You knocked two time`s then three and four, you knew not what to do, you tried again even harder and still the door was locked, I`ve been where you want to be and many time`s all alone, Once the door opened and all my prayers were answered I found my world was rocked, Knowing that you tried so hard to break down these wall`s of mine I now let you peek inside and touch all that I am, Just don`t let my heart be mocked. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Xcaliber~Welcome! Great poem! Very heartfelt.  -SEA |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
Welcome! I like how your writing expresses the fear of opening up again after being hurt. Yet we'll hurt worse in the long haul by remaining closed. Nice work. |
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Xcaliber Junior Member
since 2000-02-22
Posts 12 |
For one thing I`m at a loss just seeing that someone can read through the type. Thank you,both of you for reading. You had to of walked in my shoe`s to understand what it is that I was feeling here. And I can see that both of you have been there. Thank you |
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X Angel Senior Member
since 1999-11-07
Posts 1521Oregon |
Well from one X to another, welcome! Great poem too. Sorry you're feeling a bit blue, but time is the great healer. There is someone better for you out there. Whoever broke your heart wasn't meant for you anyways. Chin-up and remember that fate may be cruel, but she can also be kind, things will work out! There's prolly someone out there that you walk by everyday who is your soul mate!  Good Luck ~X~ Vivian Greene ~It is not our circumstances that create our discontent or contentment. It is us.~ |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
WELCOME! I think many will relate to this. I think many have been here before. Been hurt to the point you don't want to open up again. I hope whoever is peeking in will open up that heart and teach it that's alright to love again. <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to the family. I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome.  |
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Xcaliber Junior Member
since 2000-02-22
Posts 12 |
Love is such a strong word anymore. The older we get,the easier Love is suppose to be.NOT!! Im not sure where I heard that? I do know that who ever had said it had never felt the wrath of "LOVE". Thank you for your replies. |
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