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Xcaliber
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0 posted 02-22-2000 06:37 PM       View Profile for Xcaliber   Email Xcaliber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Xcaliber

You knocked two time`s
then three and four,
you knew not what to do,
you tried again even harder
and still the door was locked,

I`ve been where you want to be
and many time`s all alone,
Once the door opened
and all my prayers were answered
I found my world was rocked,

Knowing that you tried so hard
to break down these wall`s of mine
I now let you peek inside
and touch all that I am,
Just don`t let my heart be mocked.

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1 posted 02-22-2000 07:24 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Xcaliber~Welcome! Great poem! Very heartfelt.   -SEA
sandgrain
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2 posted 02-22-2000 07:33 PM       View Profile for sandgrain   Email sandgrain   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sandgrain

Welcome!  I like how your writing expresses the fear of opening up again after being hurt.  Yet we'll hurt worse in the long haul by remaining closed.  Nice work.
Xcaliber
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3 posted 02-22-2000 07:43 PM       View Profile for Xcaliber   Email Xcaliber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Xcaliber

For one thing I`m at a loss just seeing that someone can read through the type.
Thank you,both of you for reading.
You had to of walked in my shoe`s to understand what it is that I was feeling here.
And I can see that both of you have been there.
Thank you
X Angel
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4 posted 02-22-2000 08:49 PM       View Profile for X Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for X Angel

Well from one X to another, welcome!
Great poem  too. Sorry you're feeling a bit blue, but time is the great healer.
There is someone better for you out there. Whoever broke your heart wasn't meant for you anyways. Chin-up and remember that fate may be cruel, but she can also be kind, things will work out! There's prolly someone out there that you walk by everyday who is your soul mate!

Good Luck
~X~


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~It is not our circumstances that create our discontent or contentment. It is us.~
WhtDove
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5 posted 02-22-2000 11:24 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

WELCOME!  I think many will relate to this. I think many have been here before. Been hurt to the point you don't want to open up again.  I hope whoever is peeking in will open up that heart and teach it that's alright to love again.

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
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6 posted 02-23-2000 12:19 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family. I look forward to reading more from you. Please check your email for a special welcome.  
Xcaliber
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7 posted 02-23-2000 04:51 PM       View Profile for Xcaliber   Email Xcaliber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Xcaliber

Love is such a strong word anymore.
The older we get,the easier Love is suppose to be.NOT!!
Im not sure where I heard that?
I do know that who ever had said it had never felt the wrath of "LOVE".
Thank you for your replies.
 
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