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Loose love

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Nikkisweet
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since 02-14-2000
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0 posted 02-21-2000 04:07 PM       View Profile for Nikkisweet   Email Nikkisweet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nikkisweet


Dreamy unapproachable mountians overwhelmed your desire
Deadly heights reign in your love
Butterflies dance to fragrant silky romances in the night
You gracfully fly in torment of the oozing love
I am in heaven taking the halo of pain
Moving slow twards you smiling.....

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patchoulipumpkin
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Bermuda


1 posted 02-21-2000 05:09 PM       View Profile for patchoulipumpkin   Email patchoulipumpkin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for patchoulipumpkin

Hey Nikki, try posting this in Open Poetry or critical analysis, where you will get more comments on it.  This is usually set aside just for prose, so people might not comment on it, and raise discussion that is raised in the poetry posts.  Good luck with your poem.
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Purgatorial Incarceration


2 posted 02-22-2000 05:37 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Patch is right, so on it goes to Open #6!
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