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Miss Abagail Mannering
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 136
byron, il

0 posted 2000-02-22 04:52 PM



The moonbeams create
a halo in your hair,
softening your features-
making me stop and stare.

The stars shone bright
in the cool night sky
a hue of Yankee blue
was the color of your eyes.

The reflection off the water
of a shimmering still pond
paints the precious picture-
as if created by magic wand.

The sweet summer breeze
guides the little lightning bugs-
The perfect illumination
of the man I love.

Written 2/16/2000. Dedicated to my love, Richard, for our 5th month anniversary :Þ


 "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me

© Copyright 2000 Shanna Casinger - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-22 09:47 PM


this is lovey..great rhyme...I'd say Richard is a lucky man...I hope he was appropriatly grateful for this poem(smile)
take care, janet marie

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*


serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

2 posted 2000-02-23 12:34 PM


Richard is indeed, a lucky man...
Miss Abagail Mannering
Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136
byron, il
3 posted 2000-02-23 02:45 PM


Thank you both..i think he is a very special, and lucky man...I love him very much...
he has not seen the poems yet, though.

 "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2000-02-23 02:58 PM


Very lovely show of admiration for this man.  James
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