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Bonds Unbroken
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Bonds Unbroken |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Bonds Unbroken I ring the crystal doorbell to your cold callous heart these echoing walls tell me I'm just a simple counterpart. Off in a magical world of invisible walk thru mirrors and long black spiraling corridors, my insecure feelings walk inventing far fetched illusions leading everyday mortals to mystic conclusions. Tell me not of a chime based realistic moment where I be cautiously drifted into confusing bestowment. My deepest passion lies here poetically spoken as my crazy rhymes create linking bonds unbroken. |
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mystery Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 79 |
nice poem! |
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Shelley Member
since 2000-01-27
Posts 263Ohio, USA |
You have created quite a picture here. very discriptive words. Great job! |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
mystery: Thank You Shelley: Thank You, I had fun with this. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow..this is excellent free verse..very descriptive and full of imagery... very nice! take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. your my inspiration, your my fire... your words fill me with poetic desire. Every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Janet Marie: Thank You very much. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wow...I love the flow to this one...you are on a roll NC...mind giving me your muse for a while? |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Such a beautifully flowing piece! Well done, NC!!  Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nurse you have created a truly wonderful poem here. James |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
You're bound alright... long sleves and all. Nice locks too! (From the rational side of this half backed 'Stute head... nice work. Like the way this one reads) |
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