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Nurse Crachet
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0 posted 02-22-2000 04:04 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Bonds Unbroken

I ring the crystal doorbell
to your cold callous heart
these echoing walls tell me
I'm just a simple counterpart.
Off in a magical world
of invisible walk thru mirrors
and long black spiraling corridors,
my insecure feelings walk
inventing far fetched illusions
leading everyday mortals
to mystic conclusions.
Tell me not of a chime based
realistic moment
where I be cautiously drifted
into confusing bestowment.
My deepest passion lies here
poetically spoken
as my crazy rhymes
create linking bonds unbroken.
© Copyright 2000 Nurse Crachet - All Rights Reserved
mystery
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1 posted 02-22-2000 04:07 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery

nice poem!
Shelley
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2 posted 02-22-2000 05:06 PM       View Profile for Shelley   Email Shelley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Shelley

You have created quite a picture here. very discriptive words.

Great job!
Nurse Crachet
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3 posted 02-22-2000 07:13 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

mystery: Thank You

Shelley: Thank You, I had fun with this.
Janet Marie
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4 posted 02-22-2000 09:44 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

wow..this is excellent free verse..very descriptive and full of imagery... very nice! take care, janet marie

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

Lost Dreamer
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5 posted 02-23-2000 06:10 AM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

Janet Marie: Thank You very much.
hoot_owl_rn
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Wow...I love the flow to this one...you are on a roll NC...mind giving me your muse for a while?
Denise
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7 posted 02-23-2000 02:21 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Such a beautifully flowing piece! Well done, NC!!  

Denise
JamesMichael
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8 posted 02-23-2000 03:01 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nurse you have created a truly wonderful poem here.   James
Andrew Scott
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9 posted 02-23-2000 08:11 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

You're bound alright... long sleves and all. Nice locks too! (From the rational side of this half backed 'Stute head... nice work. Like the way this one reads)
 
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