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Warm Embrace |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Warm Embrace From the moment I felt your warm embrace trickle through every screaming pore of my lucid body, I desired to savor every fleeting moment. I felt my nerve endings shiver in delight as your pulsating rhythm massaged down my back. Standing still in front of what seemed a hundred crying eyes, I tried to imagine a day without your embrace, and came to realize this would become a stinky place. |
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mystery Member
since 2000-02-21
Posts 79 |
VERY NICE AND GENTLE POEM, IT REMINDS ME OF BEING IN MY BABY'S ARMS, THE WARMTH OF HIS BODY AND THE FEELING OF BEING HELD AND LOVE. |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Stinky place? HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA I was reading this one carefully, but the last line had me rolling. HAHAHA |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
There's nothing like the arms of that special 'someone'! Lovely poem, Gloria! Cute ending!  Denise |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Thank you all, for your responses This is not a Love poem, this is not a person I am describing...LOL Clue: it's sometimes hot, sometimes cold, sometimes in between [This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 02-22-2000).] |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
I have to apologize here, I guess I was more illusional than I planned on being. When I read this to my husband he saw even more in it than I even saw myself, guess I have more of an innocent mind then him...LOL. This was about my shower this morning. |
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pandora Member
since 1999-07-26
Posts 184 |
Shouldn't this be in the adult forum? hehe... I laughed, too, at the last stinky line... before that, I thought the 'stute must be an exciting place to be lately! luv, pan |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Pandora: LOL the stute getting exciting, I have to go to the corner Pub to have excitement. I tried to enhance the atmoshere there, but there all just crazy...LOL Thank you for reading. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Shower! Ya... that's what I thought... yep! And what's this nonsense about you having a husband? And, what do you mean excitements not to be found in the 'Stute? What about all those wonderful fires in the East wing and my glorious mystery head goo-stew... and all those pills from Dr. Moose you took? Excitements our middle name! I think the blow to the head handed you some serious memory loss... trust me... you're not married, there's more excitement than you can handle at the 'Stute... and ah... ya need to stop playing in the lawn sprinklers... although you're still welcome to run around nude in the front yard. Oh... and thanks for the room with a few. Your's truly... Crayon King. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I knew this was a trick poem, that's why I didn't say anything the first time I read it, (thinking how romatic and sweet), but the last line just didn't fit. LOL--Now I can tell you---cute, and enjoyed it. |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Andrew: My honey dearest sweet I love it how we meet but when it comes daylight I have a romantic delight if you care to join me one thing you must see I'm not the Stute Nurse when I cast my mighty curse. Hey, who turned off the cold water, it's getting hot in here...LOL Martie: Smart lady you are, I guess I got illusive, thank you for enjoying. [This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 02-22-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I'm so proud of myself...I got it right away Good, clever poem |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
hehehehe i had to have it splained to me tho  |
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Nurse Crachet Member
since 1999-09-27
Posts 318They know where I am! |
Ruth: I'm proud of you, I guess we think alike Walt: Thanks, sorry it was sneaky |
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