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Warm Embrace

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Nurse Crachet
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0 posted 02-22-2000 12:32 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Warm Embrace

From the moment I felt
your warm embrace
trickle through
every screaming pore
of my lucid body,
I desired to savor
every fleeting moment.
I felt my nerve endings
shiver in delight
as your pulsating rhythm
massaged down my back.
Standing still in front
of what seemed
a hundred crying eyes,
I tried to imagine
a day without your embrace,
and came to realize
this would become a stinky place.
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mystery
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1 posted 02-22-2000 12:35 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery

VERY NICE AND GENTLE POEM, IT REMINDS ME OF BEING IN MY BABY'S ARMS, THE WARMTH OF HIS BODY AND THE FEELING OF BEING HELD AND LOVE.
January Flowers
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2 posted 02-22-2000 12:39 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Stinky place?
HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA
I was reading this one carefully,
but the last line had me rolling.
HAHAHA
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3 posted 02-22-2000 03:02 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

There's nothing like the arms of that special 'someone'!  Lovely poem, Gloria! Cute ending!  

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Nurse Crachet
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4 posted 02-22-2000 04:38 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Thank you all, for your responses

This is not a Love poem, this is not a person I am describing...LOL

Clue:
it's sometimes hot,
sometimes cold,
sometimes in between



[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 02-22-2000).]
Nurse Crachet
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5 posted 02-22-2000 07:21 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

I have to apologize here, I guess I was more illusional than I planned on being. When I read this to my husband he saw even more in it than I even saw myself, guess I have more of an innocent mind then him...LOL. This was about my shower this morning.
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6 posted 02-22-2000 07:28 PM       View Profile for pandora   Email pandora   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for pandora

Shouldn't this be in the adult forum? hehe... I laughed, too, at the last stinky line... before that, I thought the 'stute must be an exciting place to be lately!  

luv, pan
Nurse Crachet
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7 posted 02-22-2000 08:18 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Pandora: LOL the stute getting exciting, I have to go to the corner Pub to have excitement. I tried to enhance the atmoshere there, but there all just crazy...LOL

Thank you for reading.
Andrew Scott
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8 posted 02-22-2000 08:41 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Shower!  Ya... that's what I thought... yep!  And what's this nonsense about you having a husband?  And, what do you mean excitements not to be found in the 'Stute?  What about all those wonderful fires in the East wing and my glorious mystery head goo-stew... and all those pills from Dr. Moose you took? Excitements our middle name!  I think the blow to the head handed you some serious memory loss... trust me... you're not married, there's more excitement than you can handle at the 'Stute... and ah... ya need to stop playing in the lawn sprinklers... although you're still welcome to run around nude in the front yard.  Oh... and thanks for the room with a few.  Your's truly... Crayon King.
Martie
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9 posted 02-22-2000 08:50 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

I knew this was a trick poem, that's why I didn't say anything the first time I read it, (thinking how romatic and sweet), but the last line just didn't fit. LOL--Now I can tell you---cute, and enjoyed it.
Nurse Crachet
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10 posted 02-22-2000 09:09 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Andrew:
My honey dearest sweet
I love it how we meet
but when it comes daylight
I have a romantic delight
if you care to join me
one thing you must see
I'm not the Stute Nurse
when I cast my mighty curse.

Hey, who turned off the cold water, it's getting hot in here...LOL

Martie: Smart lady you are, I guess I got illusive, thank you for enjoying.



[This message has been edited by Nurse Crachet (edited 02-22-2000).]
hoot_owl_rn
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11 posted 02-23-2000 11:41 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I'm so proud of myself...I got it right away  
Good, clever poem  
wayoutwalt
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12 posted 02-23-2000 11:43 AM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

hehehehe i had to have it splained to me tho  
Nurse Crachet
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13 posted 02-23-2000 04:34 PM       View Profile for Nurse Crachet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Nurse Crachet

Ruth: I'm proud of you, I guess we think alike

Walt: Thanks, sorry it was sneaky
 
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