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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554


0 posted 2000-02-22 11:06 AM


...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.

your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.

time passes, but the love remains...
as does the need, this goes unchanged.
warmed by the light that glowed with in...
touched by the words of a poets pen.

Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.

Janet Marie

I miss you baby...
I love you, always

© Copyright 2000 Janet Marie - All Rights Reserved
mystery
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since 2000-02-21
Posts 79

1 posted 2000-02-22 01:15 PM


I feel that we all have a beautiful curse amungst us.
Nice poetry!

Parker
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129
ON
2 posted 2000-02-22 02:11 PM


Very beautiful and sad, it reminds me of my own curse.

Parker

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2000-02-22 03:00 PM


Janet this is a lovely poem and I hope you find some new inspiration when you are ready to reach out again.   James
sonjes
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since 2000-02-18
Posts 564
North Carolina
4 posted 2000-02-22 06:32 PM


Once again, Janet Marie, a great verse.  I think I like it when you scream better, though.  But I think it is my mood at the present time.  Any other day, I would probably be overwhelmed by the tears that your writing provokes.  Unfortunately, I relate too well with your words.  Love it though!
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