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Verma
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0 posted 02-22-2000 10:44 AM       View Profile for Verma   Email Verma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Verma

Path of life


I wake each morn’ and walk my life,
And hope my path don’t lead to strife,
The decisions which I choose to make
Affect my mood and the path I take

I wake each morn’, take dog for walk,
And hear people moan as they talk
People look at me as I pass them by
I stare right back and wonder why?

And then one day as I walked my life
I met my daughter, son and wife
I saw the house where I would live
The wedding ring that I would give

I continue on and walk life some more
Another day, another door,
My children grow and leave their home
And all the safety they have known

Then as they grow, they bring to me,
A grandson to bounce upon my knee
The feeling of walking this life through time
Makes me say “Thank you” for this life of mine


~~STEVE~~
January 2000


© Copyright 2000 Steve Verma - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 02-22-2000 10:58 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

very nice work... nice to see someone grateful and content...nicely expressed emotions! take care, janet marie

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

Meadowmuse
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2 posted 02-22-2000 10:59 AM       View Profile for Meadowmuse   Email Meadowmuse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Meadowmuse's Home Page   View IP for Meadowmuse

Steve, your poem brings the appreciation of one's blessings into the light this morning. I enjoyed reading it  
mystery
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3 posted 02-22-2000 03:29 PM       View Profile for mystery   Email mystery   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for mystery

This poem is enough to make the most depressed person on the planet enjoy life, Life has a mysterious cycle, you never know what's to come, or how it will turn out, your's seems quite pleasant.
nice work
Marilyn
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4 posted 02-22-2000 10:07 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

We are so blest in our lives, we just need to be able to see that. Nice work.  
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5 posted 02-22-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Steve~
This is lovely and nostalgic.
I think your reflections mirror
the thoughts of many of us.
~*Marge*~


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tracie66
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6 posted 02-23-2000 04:18 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

thanks for sharing this most delightful poem it was very enlightening...
seti@home
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7 posted 04-04-2000 11:10 AM       View Profile for seti@home   Email seti@home   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for seti@home

very well written!
Denise
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Sounds like you've chosen the right path!! This is lovely Steve!!

Denise
Danny Holloway
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9 posted 04-05-2000 06:41 PM       View Profile for Danny Holloway   Email Danny Holloway   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Danny Holloway

Sounds like a nice walk.  
Nice poem.
CherylLynnMckee
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10 posted 04-05-2000 07:41 PM       View Profile for CherylLynnMckee   Email CherylLynnMckee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for CherylLynnMckee

Lovely poem...heart warming..thank you for sharing it..I enjoyed it much.

 
Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 04-05-2000 08:12 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

I love those kinds of walks. We take those when we look through the photo albums.
Well done
Liz
 
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