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wave
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since 2000-02-21
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0 posted 2000-02-22 08:10 AM





Flower Fairy


Dew drops of feelings in clouds they form
and wet a field from my fountain of dreams
for a flawless flower in wonderful bloom
in the land of fairies and flowing streams

The flower in the meadow sips from the wine
that pours to the ground from a white blue sky
She nourishes her body on pure honey dine
and fills her petals with a sweet scent sigh

A butterfly whispers in the flutter of wing
hovering about in the fresh flowery scent
and a colorful bird from above it sings
the name of the rose, in whistle and zing

They sing...

Her name is Mary

come and see

what a lovely fairy

she’s grown to be



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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
1 posted 2000-02-22 09:12 AM


I love nature ... and I really miss spring
this beautiful poem really makes me miss it a lot more
beautiful introductory poem
welcome to Passions

Rex}<{{{{o>

whiskey
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2 posted 2000-02-22 09:20 AM


This is very pretty , and a wonderful poem Welcome to passions  
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2000-02-23 07:53 AM


Very nice.
Welcome to Passion's.
~*Marge*~


[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 02-23-2000).]

Martie
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4 posted 2000-02-23 03:11 PM


I have enjoyed reading your responses to other's poetry and now this wonderful piece.  It is full of grace and lovely vision.  Welcome to Passions!
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 2000-02-23 03:17 PM


Very Beautiful. Enjoyed the lovely scents of spring
Liz

Severn
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6 posted 2000-02-23 09:27 PM


This is gorgeous - very well written - welcome to Passions!

 'Writing sharpens life;
life enriches writing'
Sylvia Plath

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2000-02-23 10:10 PM


hi..welcome to Passions...nice to have you with us...this poem is lovely and perfect...
and fairies RULE!!
take care.

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.

Janet Marie

*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*



thebob
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since 2000-02-16
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8 posted 2000-02-23 10:40 PM


welcome to passions and as you can see i am fairly new too but i can tell you you will love it here. a home on this busy internet highway
                       thebob

Alwye
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In the space between moments
9 posted 2000-02-23 11:10 PM


Soft and lovely, this feels.  Beautiful work, Welcome to Passions!  

 *Krista Knutson*

"Every moment marked with apparitions of your soul...." ~*Sarah McLachlan- Do What You Have To Do*~


jbowie
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BANGOR (that OR) ME
10 posted 2000-02-23 11:22 PM


I must say that this is a very pretty and well woven poem. I love it. A very warm feeling came from this, I hope that others also leave feeling the same peace.
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