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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-02-22 07:50 AM

I was watching you

O.K.
K.C.
I was watching
when you turned your personality on.
And as I watched you talking and laughing
that very moment my heart was charmed.
It seemed to be a private performance.
Certainly one of my warmest moments.
You the star.
Me the captive audience.
A beautiful actress
in her best performance.
So let me make the next move.
I request a chance to know you better
is there anyway we can get together?
The possibilities are endless
if you will say to me...you fell for me
I would be in heaven.
Of course you must be sincere.
And lets make that pefectly clear.
Keep in mind that little white lies always
break my heart and thats no way for love to start.

Now I can't wait to see
the next peformance marque
with staring roles for you and me.
K.C. for now I must settle for this phone call
and leave my message and hope you call.
I have a few more things I want to say.
Your the sexiest woman I've met today.
I've never met one so lovely
in my four years here in Hawaii.
Truly, the strongest message sent for awhile.
By the way did I say I like your smile.
And I'm pretty certain you don't feel
the same way about me but just in case
I'll call you anyway and leave this message.

I want to share my truest feelings with you
in hopes you might (maybe) feel the same way too.
What the heck? I love you not.
I'm only tryin to give love a start.
So if I find your eyes looking away
my heart could barely shed a tear today
for someone met only yesterday.
No way !!!!!! No way !!!!!!

On the other hand
I hope I don't miss this opportunity
to love you and have you love me.
So while my feelings are fresh and new
let me offer my heart to you.
Okey Casey (KC)
I was watching you.

Jameslee@forKC
February22,2000

[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 02-22-2000).]

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 2000-02-22 10:32 AM

Lovely take on the possible beginnings of a relationship!

Denise

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-02-22 10:51 AM

James...
who could resist this!!!
wonderful expression of things to come!!
as always...you make me smile!!!
great work. take care, janet marie

...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

January Flowers
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 209
South Carolina

3 posted 2000-02-22 12:26 PM

Smiling here, too.
Neat, the "possible beginning" butterflies.
Gotta love that!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2000-02-22 03:15 PM

Thank you Denise, Janet, and January. Sometimes my heart tries to take me places where I may never go. Hey, maybe my heart knows...I will always follow my heart. James

Eloise
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since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

5 posted 2000-02-22 08:27 PM

James, truly written from your heart. Excellent read.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2000-02-23 08:18 AM

Thank you Eloise..I'm glad you enjoyed. James

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

7 posted 2000-02-23 11:33 AM

James~ this is really tender. I like it.

-SEA

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2000-02-23 03:04 PM

Thank you Sea...I really appreciate that. James

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

9 posted 2000-02-23 05:57 PM

Excellent and well-crafted poem!

Nathan

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2000-02-24 04:41 AM

Thank you Nate...I appreciate that. James

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

11 posted 2000-02-24 12:21 PM

Wonderful way to let her know you liked what you saw! *S*

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2000-02-24 03:10 PM

Thanks suthern and I did like what I saw. Right after I gave her this poem she had just made me a wonderful steak lunch and She told me she wanted to sit across from me so she could watch me eating. And I was glad that she moved across from me so I could watch her reaction as she read the poem. She had such a beautiful smile on her face. Actually this is the first woman that I have given a poem to that sat right in front of me and read it so completly and it was a joy for me to watch her. I know this doesn't mean she loves me but to me this is a warm blessing in my life. I enjoyed those moments. A wonderful treasure to remember. James

Isis
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since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

13 posted 2000-02-24 07:57 PM

James lovely poem and I'm sure she was touched when she read it. Hopefully it'll help get things started with her. My fingers are crossed for you hon.
Your poems are always a joy to read *HUGS*

May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2000-02-26 03:59 PM

Isis we are still sorting out our feelings but she truly is a little sweetheart. James

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