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I was watching you

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 02-22-2000 07:50 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

I was watching you

O.K.
K.C.
I was watching
when you turned your personality on.
And as I watched you talking and laughing
that very moment my heart was charmed.
It seemed to be a private performance.
Certainly one of my warmest moments.
You the star.
Me the captive audience.
A beautiful actress
in her best performance.
So let me make the next move.
I request a chance to know you better
is there anyway we can get together?
The possibilities are endless
if you will say to me...you fell for me
I would be in heaven.
Of course you must be sincere.
And lets make that pefectly clear.
Keep in mind that little white lies always
break my heart and thats no way for love to start.

Now I can't wait to see
the next peformance marque
with staring roles for you and me.
K.C. for now I must settle for this phone call
and leave my message and hope you call.
I have a few more things I want to say.
Your the sexiest woman I've met today.
I've never met one so lovely
in my four years here in Hawaii.
Truly, the strongest message sent for awhile.
By the way did I say I like your smile.
And I'm pretty certain you don't feel
the same way about me but just in case
I'll call you anyway and leave this message.

I want to share my truest feelings with you
in hopes you might (maybe) feel the same way too.
What the heck?  I love you not.
I'm only tryin to give love a start.
So if I find your eyes looking away
my heart could barely shed a tear today
for someone met only yesterday.
No way !!!!!!  No way !!!!!!

On the other hand
I hope I don't miss this opportunity
to love you and have you love me.
So while my feelings are fresh and new
let me offer my heart to you.
Okey Casey (KC)
I was watching you.

Jameslee@forKC
February22,2000




[This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 02-22-2000).]
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Denise
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1 posted 02-22-2000 10:32 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely take on the possible beginnings of a relationship!

Denise
Janet Marie
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2 posted 02-22-2000 10:51 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

James...
who could resist this!!!
wonderful expression of things to come!!
as always...you make me smile!!!
great work. take care, janet marie

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

January Flowers
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3 posted 02-22-2000 12:26 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Smiling here, too.
Neat, the "possible beginning" butterflies.
Gotta love that!
JamesMichael
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4 posted 02-22-2000 03:15 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Denise, Janet, and January.  Sometimes my heart tries to take me places where I may never go.  Hey, maybe my heart knows...I will always follow my heart.  James
Eloise
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5 posted 02-22-2000 08:27 PM       View Profile for Eloise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Eloise

James, truly written from your heart.  Excellent read.  
JamesMichael
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6 posted 02-23-2000 08:18 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Eloise..I'm glad you enjoyed. James
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with you


7 posted 02-23-2000 11:33 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

James~ this is really tender. I like it. -SEA
JamesMichael
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8 posted 02-23-2000 03:04 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Sea...I really appreciate that.  James
Nate Dogg
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9 posted 02-23-2000 05:57 PM       View Profile for Nate Dogg   Email Nate Dogg   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nate Dogg's Home Page   View IP for Nate Dogg

Excellent and well-crafted poem!

 Nathan
JamesMichael
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10 posted 02-24-2000 04:41 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Nate...I appreciate that.  James
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on the threshold of a dream


11 posted 02-24-2000 12:21 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Wonderful way to let her know  you liked what you saw! *S*
JamesMichael
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12 posted 02-24-2000 03:10 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thanks suthern and I did like what I saw.  Right after I gave her this poem she had just made me a wonderful steak lunch and  She told me she wanted to sit across from me so she could watch me eating. And I was glad that she moved across from me so I could watch her reaction as she read the poem. She had such a beautiful smile on her face.  Actually this is the first woman that I have given a poem to that sat right in front of me and read it so completly and it was a joy for me to watch her.  I know this doesn't mean she loves me but to me this is a warm  blessing in my life.  I enjoyed those moments.  A wonderful treasure to remember.  James
Isis
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13 posted 02-24-2000 07:57 PM       View Profile for Isis   Email Isis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Isis's Home Page   View IP for Isis

James lovely poem and I'm sure she was touched when she read it.  Hopefully it'll help get things started with her.  My fingers are crossed for you hon.
Your poems are always a joy to read *HUGS*  

 May the world hug you today,
With it's warmth and love.
I pray it whispers a joyful tune in your heart,
That tell you there is a friend sitting in another corner of the world,
Wishing you well and
wishing you love......
~Isis~
(Goddess - Sovereign of the Spirit)


JamesMichael
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14 posted 02-26-2000 03:59 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Isis we are still sorting out our feelings but she truly is a little sweetheart.  James
 
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