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One Rocky Climatic Mountain (For Michael)

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Lost Dreamer
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One Rocky Climatic Mountain

One rocky climatic mountain
stood before a reserved
and pessimistic mind.

The dangerous inclination
juggled playfully
within a soul of desire.

The sparkling stars
dancing enticingly
tickling a battered heart.

The delicate sound of silence
harmoniously launched
the expedition of destiny.

One rocky climatic mountain
challenged frightfully
the inner fringes of happiness.

A blessed unknown vision
softly lurking
waiting patiently for discovery.

Tremendous doubt and turmoil
retreated a damaged soul
to the quest of honest prayer.

One rocky climatic mountain
victoriously captured
given way to peaceful solitude.
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I love the message this poem gives, as well as the images! So nice!!!  
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LostDreamer~
This is thoughtful.
Lovely and very calming.
He will think so too.
~*Marge*~


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This is so beautifully comforting, Gloria. I believe that whatever brings us to our knees in prayer is really a good thing, ultimately, for that is the best place to be.  

Denise
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Gloria, you're so sweet! This was wonderful.
I'm sure he'll love it.
Janet Marie
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L.D.
this is a beautiful poem and gesture...and as inspiring as the person who it is written for...how caring of you!!!
take care, janet marie

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

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6 posted 02-22-2000 07:44 PM       View Profile for Lost Dreamer   Email Lost Dreamer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lost Dreamer

I want to Thank all of you, this was one of those spark of inspiration poems.
Michael
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7 posted 02-23-2000 12:55 AM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Been one heck of a climb so far Gloria.  thank you for such a splendid poem.  Truly, it seems like a mountain I have been climbing - though from here, I can appreciate the beauty of where I stand, today.  Your words have warmed my soul.  You devotion to friendship stand next to none.  Thank you for everything but especially for reminding me, in all things - forgive.


Michael

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Wonderful and wise words Gloria...perhaps more than just Michael needs to be reminded of this...*raises her hand* thanks for the reminder  
 
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