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One Rocky Climatic Mountain (For Michael)
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One Rocky Climatic Mountain (For Michael) |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow 
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One Rocky Climatic Mountain One rocky climatic mountain stood before a reserved and pessimistic mind. The dangerous inclination juggled playfully within a soul of desire. The sparkling stars dancing enticingly tickling a battered heart. The delicate sound of silence harmoniously launched the expedition of destiny. One rocky climatic mountain challenged frightfully the inner fringes of happiness. A blessed unknown vision softly lurking waiting patiently for discovery. Tremendous doubt and turmoil retreated a damaged soul to the quest of honest prayer. One rocky climatic mountain victoriously captured given way to peaceful solitude. |
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christies heart Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189NJ, USA |
I love the message this poem gives, as well as the images! So nice!!!  |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostDreamer~ This is thoughtful. Lovely and very calming. He will think so too. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is so beautifully comforting, Gloria. I believe that whatever brings us to our knees in prayer is really a good thing, ultimately, for that is the best place to be.  Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Gloria, you're so sweet! This was wonderful. I'm sure he'll love it. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
L.D. this is a beautiful poem and gesture...and as inspiring as the person who it is written for...how caring of you!!! take care, janet marie ...every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. every poem and song... every rhyme and verse... your still here...like a beautiful curse. your my inspiration, your my fire... your words fill me with poetic desire. Every moment of every day... your still with me in every way. Janet Marie *I miss you baby... I love you, always.* |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
I want to Thank all of you, this was one of those spark of inspiration poems. |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Been one heck of a climb so far Gloria. thank you for such a splendid poem. Truly, it seems like a mountain I have been climbing - though from here, I can appreciate the beauty of where I stand, today. Your words have warmed my soul. You devotion to friendship stand next to none. Thank you for everything but especially for reminding me, in all things - forgive. Michael [This message has been edited by Michael (edited 02-23-2000).] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Wonderful and wise words Gloria...perhaps more than just Michael needs to be reminded of this...*raises her hand* thanks for the reminder |
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