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Lost Inside you

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whiskey
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0 posted 02-22-2000 12:59 AM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Lost inside love
A thought never known
A feeling too hidden
Too hard to explain
Not thinking the way
Eyes too thorned to see
Lost inside Love
Taken from me
Visions of past
Happiness there
No chance to be taken
No glance or stare
All was together
Me and you there
Till the day you decided
Our love wasnt fair
Love for you to give
No you to give to
You took you away
And left me so blue
Lost inside love
Longing for you


© Copyright 2000 Julie Nelson - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 02-22-2000 01:09 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Little Whiskey gal~
This is much too sad for someone as
lovely as you.  I long for the
smile to be back in your heart.
**HUGS**
~*Marge*~


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JamesMichael
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2 posted 02-22-2000 08:19 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

A very beautiful poem ...James
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3 posted 02-22-2000 11:18 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for vandana

Beautiful poem,julie.!
January Flowers
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4 posted 02-22-2000 12:13 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

There is truly something about you poets
who can take so few words
and build a majestic feeling with them,
that I envy.
This is a great display,
choc ful 'o emotion.
Enjoyed much.
whiskey
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5 posted 02-22-2000 06:51 PM       View Profile for whiskey   Email whiskey   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit whiskey's Home Page   View IP for whiskey

Thank you all for your replies , You all are so kind   I missed this place
Janet Marie
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6 posted 02-22-2000 06:57 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

whiskey...
this is excellent...emotionally beautiful.
very nice work. take care, janet marie

 ...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 02-22-2000 07:33 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Hi, stranger! Nice to see you again, and a lovely poem to come back with
Liz
Martie
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8 posted 02-22-2000 07:48 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Beautifully sad poem.
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