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whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

0 posted 2000-02-22 12:59 PM

Lost inside love
A thought never known
A feeling too hidden
Too hard to explain
Not thinking the way
Eyes too thorned to see
Lost inside Love
Taken from me
Visions of past
Happiness there
No chance to be taken
No glance or stare
All was together
Me and you there
Till the day you decided
Our love wasnt fair
Love for you to give
No you to give to
You took you away
And left me so blue
Lost inside love
Longing for you

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-02-22 01:09 AM

Little Whiskey gal~
This is much too sad for someone as
lovely as you. I long for the
smile to be back in your heart.
**HUGS**
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2000-02-22 08:19 AM

A very beautiful poem ...James

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

3 posted 2000-02-22 11:18 AM

Beautiful poem,julie.!

January Flowers
Member

since 2000-02-01

Posts 209
South Carolina

4 posted 2000-02-22 12:13 PM

There is truly something about you poets
who can take so few words
and build a majestic feeling with them,
that I envy.
This is a great display,
choc ful 'o emotion.
Enjoyed much.

whiskey

Senior Member

since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
Australia

5 posted 2000-02-22 06:51 PM

Thank you all for your replies , You all are so kind

I missed this place

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-02-22 06:57 PM

whiskey...
this is excellent...emotionally beautiful.
very nice work. take care, janet marie

...every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
every poem and song...
every rhyme and verse...
your still here...like a beautiful curse.
your my inspiration, your my fire...
your words fill me with poetic desire.
Every moment of every day...
your still with me in every way.
Janet Marie
*I miss you baby...
I love you, always.*

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2000-02-22 07:33 PM

Hi, stranger! Nice to see you again, and a lovely poem to come back with
Liz

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

8 posted 2000-02-22 07:48 PM

Beautifully sad poem.

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