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tulip
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since 1999-07-04
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0 posted 2000-02-22 12:24 PM



A time for me to understand
to find my place alone.
I wash away my tears at last
breaking through this mask.

I seek to find my other half
but I'm not whole myself,
I'll work to reach my happiness
through stresses, and lonliness.

Maybe one day I'll be whole again,
happy by myself.
And when I am, I hope we share
the love we wouldn't dare.


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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

1 posted 2000-02-22 12:27 PM


tulip,
this is a very sweet emotional poem...well expressed in a few words ...the last line is a perfect ending.
take care, janet marie

 I love you
Is all that you can't say-
Years gone by and still...
Words don't come easily
Like I love you, I love you...
But you can say baby...
Baby can I hold you tonight
Maybe if I told you the right words
At the right time you'd be mine...
Tracy Chapman



JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-02-22 06:37 AM


Tulip this is nice.  Working to reach your happiness.    James
christies heart
Member
since 1999-08-10
Posts 189
NJ, USA
3 posted 2000-02-22 07:28 AM


Very true message and a great poem...

    

January Flowers
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since 2000-02-01
Posts 209
South Carolina
4 posted 2000-02-22 12:35 PM


Simple writing that shares so much.
Chin up, so you will look in the right direction!

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