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We wouldn't dare

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tulip
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0 posted 02-22-2000 12:24 AM       View Profile for tulip   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for tulip


A time for me to understand
to find my place alone.
I wash away my tears at last
breaking through this mask.

I seek to find my other half
but I'm not whole myself,
I'll work to reach my happiness
through stresses, and lonliness.

Maybe one day I'll be whole again,
happy by myself.
And when I am, I hope we share
the love we wouldn't dare.

© Copyright 2000 tulip - All Rights Reserved
Janet Marie
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1 posted 02-22-2000 12:27 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

tulip,
this is a very sweet emotional poem...well expressed in a few words ...the last line is a perfect ending.
take care, janet marie

 I love you
Is all that you can't say-
Years gone by and still...
Words don't come easily
Like I love you, I love you...
But you can say baby...
Baby can I hold you tonight
Maybe if I told you the right words
At the right time you'd be mine...
Tracy Chapman


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2 posted 02-22-2000 06:37 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Tulip this is nice.  Working to reach your happiness.    James
christies heart
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3 posted 02-22-2000 07:28 AM       View Profile for christies heart   Email christies heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for christies heart

Very true message and a great poem...

    
January Flowers
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4 posted 02-22-2000 12:35 PM       View Profile for January Flowers   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for January Flowers

Simple writing that shares so much.
Chin up, so you will look in the right direction!
 
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