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beowulf_26
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The hum drum rum
Of your off beat drum
Drives me mad with desire.

Your brown-green eyes
Flicker pale-soft
Of love lots swimming inside
Like the rosy dawn fingers.

The Diet Coke rope around
My neck, Beck, gotta have sex.
Donít come around if ya ainít got none.

Some say Iím Crazy.
Youíll heed my rhyme
As I say to you
Donít pay the time.
If you donít like the beat
Insert your clichť.




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I liked this a lot! Definitely enjoyed your twists and turns of phrases. (there: cliche inserted)

Mike
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