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beowulf_26
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0 posted 2000-02-22 12:08 PM


The hum drum rum
Of your off beat drum
Drives me mad with desire.

Your brown-green eyes
Flicker pale-soft
Of love lots swimming inside
Like the rosy dawn fingers.

The Diet Coke rope around
My neck, Beck, gotta have sex.
Don’t come around if ya ain’t got none.

Some say I’m Crazy.
You’ll heed my rhyme
As I say to you
Don’t pay the time.
If you don’t like the beat
Insert your cliché.


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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2000-02-22 12:10 PM


I liked this a lot! Definitely enjoyed your twists and turns of phrases. (there: cliche inserted)

Mike

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