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How Will You Know ?

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Marge Tindal
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How Will You Know ?
~Marge Tindal~

How will you know that I love you ?
I will tell you everyday.
I'll write it on your heart
with indelible ink
so it will stay.

If you ever doubt my love,
you've only to look within.
You will find the words
I LOVE YOU
I've taken the time to pen.

You will know I love you,
with the rising of the sun.
Day will not end without my telling you
that you are my special one.

How will you know I love you ?
You will see it in my eyes,
as we gaze into tomorrow
and you hear my deepening sighs.

I love you now.
I love you for the rest of our days.
I love you for who you are.
Please stay just that way.





 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 2000 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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Ooh, I'm the first to comment on a new poem of yrs? Cool! As usual, I enjoyed this. I can almost remember that exact feeling you describe -- great work.

Mike
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Mike~
Thank you, darling.
I'm glad it stirred you to remember.
Remembering such pleasant feelings
is remembering the good love brings us.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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wow Marge..your really inspired tonite!!
another great one...perfect rhyme and full of sweet emotions. very nice
take care, janet marie

 I love you
Is all that you can't say-
Years gone by and still...
Words don't come easily
Like I love you, I love you...
But you can say baby...
Baby can I hold you tonight
Maybe if I told you the right words
At the right time you'd be mine...
Tracy Chapman


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Marge incredibly beautiful is all I can say. Loved it...Tracie
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JanetMarie~
Thank you for reading and enjoying.

Tracie~
Thank you, sweetie.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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This is a treat to read very nice I liked it alot lots of emotion which is great   beautiful poem
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Marge,
Well I'll stay the way I am. *L* PS wonderful poem.
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Oh Marge~ came on here this morning, and I found a hug! This sets the mood for my day! How wonderful. I really enjoy all of your poems,but I think this is my favorite! -SEA
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Uplifting. Just what we need around here!  

 <*\\\><

There's only two ways you can go...
One way you can save your riches,
And the other will save your soul.
Rich Mullins
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10 posted 02-22-2000 10:22 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is lovely, Marge! Love at its finest!

Denise
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Such a loving testimonial to pure devotion...thanks Marge, this poem is wonderful  
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Simply lovely, Marge!


Corinne
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lovely poem.
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Sigh.
The forum leaves me with lots of those as of late.
This is beautiful, as usual, Marge.
To have inside so much dedication
for a special person, so much love...
sickenly sweet.
I'll tuck this one away for when I need a reminder
that love does exist.
Thanks for the read.
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Marge, you are the caretaker of love.  Wonderful poem!
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Whiskey~
Emotions flow from love.
Thanks.

Seymour~
Well ... just how you are
is just about perfect to me.
Love ya'

SEA~
If it's your favorite
then you may have it to live
in your heart.

WhiteDove~
A big 10-4 on the uplift.
Me?  I'm taking the elevator
to the top floor !  

Denise~
Just happy knowing you're here.

Claire~
Devotion to love is giving all.
Thank you.

Corinne~
Thanks, my friend.

VanDana~
And from my heart, I thank you.

JanuaryFlowers~
Love does indeed exist, hon.
I'll still be here when you find
love in your *sighs*.

Martie~
'Caretaker' and Partaker !  
~*Marge*~




 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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Wonderful, Marge. You are no doubt a lady who loves with every fiber of her being...which is of course the only way. Beautiful words.........
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Marge, I always look forward to reading your posts and once again you didn't let me down.  This is beautifully written.  
Marge Tindal
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Balladeer~
I think you know me well, sir.
Thank you.

Eloise~
What a nice compliment.
It is not taken lightly.
Thank you.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Mom?  Remember me?  THIS IS FAB!!!  loved the
irony at the end...you wise, wise, woman, you.
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Your words always make me smile, Marge.  "I love you" can never be said - nor heard enough me thinks.


Michael


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Serenity~ my child~
Remember you?  Remember you
How in the world could I forget you?
      
Glad you like.

Michael~
Ahhhhh !  You've hit upon a truth there !
If I've given you a smile ... then I am
tickled PINK

I love ... therefore I am loved.
~*Marge*~



 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Thanks for reminding me that LOVE is an action verb, not just a word to be to be used for convience or fleeting conquest. Now where can I get some of THAT ink?

 
Marge Tindal
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Dennis~
Thank you for reading and understanding
the need to take that action to the limit.
E-mail me if you really want the 'INK'.
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

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