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How Will You Know ?
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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How Will You Know ? ~Marge Tindal~ How will you know that I love you ? I will tell you everyday. I'll write it on your heart with indelible ink so it will stay. If you ever doubt my love, you've only to look within. You will find the words I LOVE YOU I've taken the time to pen. You will know I love you, with the rising of the sun. Day will not end without my telling you that you are my special one. How will you know I love you ? You will see it in my eyes, as we gaze into tomorrow and you hear my deepening sighs. I love you now. I love you for the rest of our days. I love you for who you are. Please stay just that way. ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Ooh, I'm the first to comment on a new poem of yrs? Cool! As usual, I enjoyed this. I can almost remember that exact feeling you describe -- great work. Mike |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ Thank you, darling. I'm glad it stirred you to remember. Remembering such pleasant feelings is remembering the good love brings us. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
wow Marge..your really inspired tonite!! another great one...perfect rhyme and full of sweet emotions. very nice  take care, janet marie I love you Is all that you can't say- Years gone by and still... Words don't come easily Like I love you, I love you... But you can say baby... Baby can I hold you tonight Maybe if I told you the right words At the right time you'd be mine... Tracy Chapman |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge incredibly beautiful is all I can say. Loved it...Tracie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Thank you for reading and enjoying. Tracie~ Thank you, sweetie. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
This is a treat to read very nice I liked it alot lots of emotion which is great  beautiful poem |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marge, Well I'll stay the way I am. *L* PS wonderful poem. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Oh Marge~ came on here this morning, and I found a hug! This sets the mood for my day! How wonderful. I really enjoy all of your poems,but I think this is my favorite! -SEA |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Uplifting. Just what we need around here!  <*\\\>< There's only two ways you can go... One way you can save your riches, And the other will save your soul. Rich Mullins |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Marge! Love at its finest! Denise |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Such a loving testimonial to pure devotion...thanks Marge, this poem is wonderful |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Simply lovely, Marge! Corinne |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
lovely poem. |
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January Flowers Member
since 2000-02-01
Posts 209South Carolina |
Sigh. The forum leaves me with lots of those as of late. This is beautiful, as usual, Marge. To have inside so much dedication for a special person, so much love... sickenly sweet. I'll tuck this one away for when I need a reminder that love does exist. Thanks for the read. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, you are the caretaker of love. Wonderful poem! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Whiskey~ Emotions flow from love. Thanks. Seymour~ Well ... just how you are is just about perfect to me. Love ya' SEA~ If it's your favorite then you may have it to live in your heart. WhiteDove~ A big 10-4 on the uplift. Me? I'm taking the elevator to the top floor ! Denise~ Just happy knowing you're here. Claire~ Devotion to love is giving all. Thank you. Corinne~ Thanks, my friend. VanDana~ And from my heart, I thank you. JanuaryFlowers~ Love does indeed exist, hon. I'll still be here when you find love in your *sighs*. Martie~ 'Caretaker' and Partaker ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Wonderful, Marge. You are no doubt a lady who loves with every fiber of her being...which is of course the only way. Beautiful words......... |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Marge, I always look forward to reading your posts and once again you didn't let me down. This is beautifully written. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Balladeer~ I think you know me well, sir. Thank you. Eloise~ What a nice compliment. It is not taken lightly. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Mom? Remember me? THIS IS FAB!!! loved the irony at the end...you wise, wise, woman, you. |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Your words always make me smile, Marge. "I love you" can never be said - nor heard enough me thinks. Michael |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ my child~ Remember you? Remember you How in the world could I forget you? Glad you like. Michael~ Ahhhhh ! You've hit upon a truth there ! If I've given you a smile ... then I am tickled PINK I love ... therefore I am loved. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
Thanks for reminding me that LOVE is an action verb, not just a word to be to be used for convience or fleeting conquest. Now where can I get some of THAT ink? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dennis~ Thank you for reading and understanding the need to take that action to the limit. E-mail me if you really want the 'INK'. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Marge Gotta say first off... I have only been a member here a day, and I can already tell this is a wonderful place. Your poem was filled with such wonderful emotion. Love is such a wonderful feeling isnt it?! Great poem! A very nice addition to a wonderful day. ~Amy~  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Amy~ First .... welcome to Passion's. Secondly .... thank you for your comments. Thirdly .... yes, it is a wonderful place filled with love, talent and friendship. You can't help but enjoy your stay here. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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